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The Shortest Fireworks Show in History
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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TRUE STORY!!

I wish I knew who the photographer was...this is what it looked like...

Hope your Fourth of July is happy and storm free. :-) Stay safe! :-)


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"The Shortest Fireworks Show In History"

Let me take you back...way back in time,
Way waaaay back, to nineteen sixty nine,
Karen and I had just turned ten years old,
And this is how this story unfolds...

Severe storms had formed on Lake Erie,
No worries here, our weather, cheery,
We went to see the fireworks show,
At our high school in Ontario (OHIO),  :-)

Lightning was flashing up to the north,
That day we celebrated the Fourth,
We weren't worried, as it got dark,
We waited for fireworks to spark,

All of a sudden...FLASH!  Lightning struck,
The middle of the display...what luck!!
Fireworks went off, all at one time,
The night lit up like it was daytime,

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!

The biggest explosions ever heard!

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!

Then I heard someone say a cuss-word

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!

Our eyes shrank from the lightning's display

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!

Mother Nature had the final say!!


We all fell off the bleachers that night,
Gasping and terrified by the sight,
No one was hurt so we all went home,
The night the fireworks show was blown,

Show over before it had begun,
Storms had robbed us of all of the fun,
We watched as storm after storm rolled in,
That night Nature looked at us and grinned.

(C) Copy written, July 3, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "The Shortest Fireworks Show in History"
Reviewed on July 5, 2004
Thank goodness no one got hurt but one big bang and flash not a bad fireworks show.
thanks for story
Tommy

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on July 4, 2004
LOLOL, Wow that one sure did go with a big bang :)
Short but extremely impacting hehe.

xoxoxox Ch'erie

Reviewed on July 3, 2004
Another amazing write
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
Yep, nature had the upper hand. Great story in poetic form. Happy 4th!

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
Wow! Now I can see why you fear those thunderheads above!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
Karla, great write , capturing the flavor of that night very well!
Some experience for young children!;-)Stay safe this fouth, and have a happy one!;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
Very powerful moment that must of been Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
nature's proclammation of her freedom

how unique and so well composed

thanks,
d.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
This is a remarkable tale, Karla. No one got hurt, and Nature had the biggest fireworks display of all. Very Interesting! This should teach us not to mess with Mother Nature.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
You are such an excellent story teller.

peg

Reviewed on July 3, 2004
(((Karla)))

*BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!*

WOWEE, what a noise THAT was! I still can remember it years later!! GEEZ!! Thanks for the memory jog!

Excellent write; enjoyed! And that pic...WOW!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
What a cool fireworks display that would have made, no wonder you are a stormaphobic...Ed


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