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Climb On
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Ride your dreams to the sky. :-)


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A challenge is issued to my soul.
I must learn how to forget myself.
New words promise a new adventure.
All I must do is trust and climb on.

I am afraid, I am so afraid,
Because I don't see a safety net.
And what if I fall?  Who will catch me?
I'll never know unless I climb on.

I see a Genie on a carpet.
His eyes twinkle in his face like stars.
He tells me that he's glad to see me.
What do you wish for?  Tell me, climb on.

Where is it that you would like to go?
What places have you wanted to see?
I will take you anywhere you want.
Your wishes have been granted.  Climb on.

The carpet is gorgeous.  It looks strong.
All of a sudden, it is airborne!
I discover I am scared of heights.
Why, oh why did I have to climb on?

The Genie takes my hand from my eyes.
He tells me to open up my heart.
My horizons are narrowed by fear.
To expand them, I had to climb on.

The carpet dips between thunderheads.
Lightning sparkles in the Genie's teeth.
Nervously, I reach out and touch him.
It is okay, because I climbed on.

I chase meteors across the sky.
I dance with the brilliant Northern Lights.
Eagles tell me their flying secrets.
So if I fall, I can climb back on.

We laugh and play with tiger kittens.
I can't believe I befriend a shark!
I now have Sasquatch's home address.
I live, because I dared to climb on.

I rope a tornado, break it down.
I bounce off mountains and touch the sun.
I find out I'm rich beyond measure.
And all I had to do was climb on.

(C) Copy written, August 11, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Climb On"
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Karla...what a mgical set of verses you have written here...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Karla The Konqueror! This is a gold-medal winner, Karla, and we have travelled the highs and lows of this write with you: the exhileration and the fear! Very well done - you showed those storms and tornados a thing or two - and you trusted your Genie even when his teeth glistened with the threat of lightning! You show us how to overcome - she who dares wins! Excellent write and spirit demonstrated here! Bless you... keep climbing on!!! Kate xx

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
just climb on...how we do tend to make things harder than they really are, didn't you feel much better by a simple step...now do you have room for me i've been truying to climb mountains...BigSmiles

so glad to read this...lets me know your feeling good


much love
take care

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Very well done Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Superb awakening! Glad you finally joined me;-)!
Climb on and Grab on to life for all its worth Karla
its only temporary anyway! Don't let fear of anything
obstruct your view,You have the Supreme one on your side!
Turn fear into energy, by trusting yourself in Him!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Absolutely right Karla ... AAA+++!!! Spread your wings and fly ... you will go far!

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
You see...once you take your foot off third base you slide on home. Without climbing on....we wouldn't have this delightful poem. Thanks for your bravery. We all win now!
Susan

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
this is such an awesome poem and attitude, Karla

Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Much truth here. A great read.

Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Karla -

A ride we'd all like to take! Super piece!

Robert

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Very well-done, Karla! Soar on, Poet!

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Very enjoyable write with a great message. Keep up the good work!

Reviewed on August 11, 2004
This was wonderful Karla, such a joy to go on that ride with you!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
A parachute is required for flights of fancy herein at the den, and so it seems you do need one for the higher and higher you go, the thinner the air gets, the more you do realize how beautiful life can be...Peace thru Floating on Thin air, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Great message!

Reviewed on August 11, 2004
I'll join you on your magic carpet ride, Karla; sounds like we could all get away! Wonderful write, and I love how your brilliant and creative muse operates! Well done, Karla; BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
We all need to climb on Karla..sure would make for some interesting thought patterns.
but now I may have to pass on the friend of a shark thingy!
An awesome tale of fantasy here Karla!

Lisa

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Climb higher and higher, dear girl...
and keep this positive attitude as long as you can.
You are coming out of the darkness again, and doing
in in lovely fashion. This is most creative!


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