I Knew I Shouldn't Have Ridden That! (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

Well, I'm sure glad you've written that! Cute and funny in a mixed-up sort-of way.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Karla, everyone seems to be giving in to their 'funny bones' here and not paying enough attention to the actual BRILLIANCE of the write, itself! Jaysus, Petunia, every single line here, then combined, is what I call a one-of-a-kind tutorial in cleverness! I'm keeping this, to remind me that pushing the envelope is always the way to go... you have created hilarity, true... but the delivery of it is one helluvan example of creativity at its best! Fantastic! katy xox.

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Wonderful poem! What a ride!

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

I did not get it at first, but now
I do! Hilarious! Wonderful poem! You
just keep on getting better and better!
Awesome!
Love,
Becca

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

Looks like fun...I love a good coaster especially when it rattles the mind. Really enjoyed the write.. :-}

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

I started laughing at the picture then the poem kept me chuckling. I used to love roller coasters, now I'm a coward. Stop drinking those pork chops and the ride won't seem so bad or was it the other way around? LOL

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

absolutely fantastic!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

LOLOL, sounds like what I call a sickerliser..

Love it beaut..

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

lol Splat goes the storm, I need a few
brain cells scattered. ;)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

HO HO! Some really great lines in this epic write, Karla!

PS I know a few folks I'd like you to splat, if you have the time!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

Oh I enjoyed this Read!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

a very klear headed write

nicely done, kj!

love

j+

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

Great. This is great Karla. Your poems are always a pleasure to read

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

What a write you had Karla...beautiful...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

lol, this is so adorable Karla!

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

HEE HEE! Been there, done that! FUNNY write, especially when it happens to someone ELSE! Michelle4

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

Karla, dear, now you know you were all screwed up LONG before that ride...this is the first poem that you were really yourself, allowed yourself to become all screwed up for the rest of us...Your Screwed up Friends from NJ, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

Now that sounds fun! Come on, you liked it!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

Fun!

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

Grate ride and write

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

LOL Karla this was great
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

Karla you sure got confused from ride,but did a Great writ! . Is that a pic of you? That's great!;-)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

Wild Dam Fool Ride,i.e. I Love It!

TRASK

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

(((Karla)))

Are you SURE that you survived the ride? Seems that your brains are STILL mixed up! LOL Seems you went through a tornado on the Storm...naybe TWO! LOL Love it, love it, LOVE it! BRAVA; well done! LOL Thanks for the grins!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Just LOVE the expression on that guy's face..hiLARious, absolutely HiLARious! LOL