~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "NEXT????" (For Jay Chattain and Killer Kate, Creepmeisters)
There he is... Lying there, under the sheets... Been watching... He is my next *TASTY* treat... There he is... At peace...he thinks he's safe...WRONG! Been watching... To me, alone, he belongs... There he is... My victim is fast asleep... Been watching... Each breath is even and deep... There he is... What tortures can I devise? Been watching... What ter-rors be his demise? There he is... I know when he goes to work... Been watching... In hidden shadows I've lurked... There he is... I know EVERYTHING he's done... Been watching... He has no clue, not a one... There he is... I've been stalking him for weeks... Been WATCHING! I can't WAIT to him him shriek... There he is... No more will he dream sweet dreams... Been watching... It's time that I hear him scream... THERE HE IS! AND HE DOESN'T KNOW I AM THERE... Been watching... O, yes...I'm his worst nightmare!
~~MWA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!!~~
(Happy Halloween!)
(C) Copy written, 2002/Revised, October, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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Reviews of "Next???? (For Jay Chattin and Killer Kate, Creepmeisters)"
Wow Karla this is creepy! You write a perfectly ghoulish Halloween poem. Well done.
...Out of sunny South Africa where we have witch doctors (that's where witches go when they're sick lol)
Love Chanti
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2004
Sounds like something that could be said about one of my characters in the first book and the second. Excellant write
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2004
Karla, talk about seeing an eye for a sore sight… lol. This is really good scary stuff my friend! I’m closing my window shades tight tonight… lol. Matter of fact, I don’t think I’ll be doing any sound sleeping for quite some time! Excellent work. Take care and be well.
A short story of mine was included in an anthology of short fiction by fourteen of Port Town Publishing Company's authors. It is out of print and no longer available except as a download. Contact me at charlenetess@yahoo.com if you want it.
excellent write felt your eyes watching here
Tommy
Love it when you getting spooky sweet thing! Of course you realize I might still have to kill you :-) hehehe
Love Tinka
I better be careful if I ever run
into Jay or Kate! Ha! LOL~
Take care, excellent poem!
Love ya!
Becca
Hauntingly exceptional, my dear friend ... this is one scary write - 'terror'ific!!
Robert
Karla is dripping with talent;-)
...Out of sunny South Africa where we have witch doctors (that's where witches go when they're sick lol)
Love Chanti
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
God Bless
Michelle~