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My Christmas Present
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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MY CHRISTMAS PRESENT
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I bought a large bundle of love today,
gift wrapped it in the prettiest paper 
I could find, put a HUGE red bow on it
and on the tag I wrote:

THIS REMINDS ME OF YOU.

There was a blanket of peace on sale!
It was slightly worn around the edges
but otherwise, it's in good condition.
Expect it for Christmas.

FOR USE WHENEVER NEEDED.

I saw a bountiful feast of blessings...
I immediately thought of you when I
saw it,  'cause your supply's run low.
On the gift tag it says:

UNLIMITED USE, NO RESTRICTIONS.

And o, that beautiful box filled with
joy!  I had to get it...I couldn't help
Myself.  I love to see you happy.  So
please read the gift tag:

ESPECIALLY FOR YOU.

And the best present I have for you?
The Gift of Salvation, made available
to you if you will only believe in My
Son...My Christmas Present

SENT TO YOU WITH ALL MY LOVE.

Merry Christmas, my Child.
I love you.
~~~~~~~~~
~God

(C) Copy written, 19 December, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "My Christmas Present"
Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
Enjoyed the warm feelings of this poem..."That beautiful box filled with joy"...Thanks for sharing this...

EDL

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
Karla this is such a pleasure to read, just lovely and festive.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
How original, and such a great write, babe..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
What a marvelous Gift List - for Anyone.

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
Beautiful write Karla...Happy holidays...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
Wonderful!

Your friend,
Silke

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
a wonderful poetic present ...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
an excellent write...

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
I really loved this Kar, was so "new", so colorful, I just think it was, christmassy al

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
Sweety this is your best! Send this one to a publisher immediately! Applause.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
Kep On Writing You can Only Get Better N Better!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
Oh Karla, Thank You. This is just Wonderful. Just Wonderful Thank You ever so much.
The photo is magnificent. Thank You.
Merriest Christmas Many Blessed Years
Tracey

Reviewed on December 19, 2004
Karla an excellent piece
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
This is really excellent, Karla. You have captured the spirit of Christmas perfectly.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
I really like this too and it is penned so well. Thanks for this gift.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
Perfection Karla! You know He is smiling with happiness for this beautiful tribute to Him! Kudo's!

Reviewed on December 19, 2004
Karla,

A most stunning and gorgeous write my friend - right from the heart ... extraordinarily perfect!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
Absolutely beautiful!You and sis are the silent saints of the den. Your support means much to many. HUGS

Reviewed on December 19, 2004
The Greatest Gift of all: our Lord and Saviour, Jesus Christ! Now THAT IS the best gift of all! Wonderful write, Karla; well done! BRAvA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

You are *my* greatest Christmas gift! :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
Most excellent Gift of love Karla!!

Love Tinka


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