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Thunder in my Pen
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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He emerged from a cloudbank,
a spirit from the four winds,
born of Storm.
His face was creased with ancient
knowledge passed down through time, now
His alone;
obsidian eyes that missed
nothing took in all of His
surroundings;
He saw me, trembling, before Him,
and a smile crinkled His
ageless cheeks -
'I mean no harm,' He said in
a voice gravelly with hail,
'Do not fear.'
He reached into my soul with
His hands and gave me words to
spin the tales ...
and as silently as He
appeared, He was gone in a
single flash -
the only evidence that
He was here is the thunder
in my pen ...
I met the StormSpinner and
am alive to tell the tales
He told me.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
 

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 Reviews of "Thunder in my Pen"
Reviewed by Janet Bellinger
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
You succeed in getting across the tunderous muse who takes hold of your pen. Congratulations. So powerful.

Janet

Reviewed on March 10, 2006
This is great Karla keep em coming
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed on March 9, 2006
This sent chills up and down our spine, brilliant!
love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
Brilliant writing Karla!
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Robert Martin
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
His face was creased with ancient
knowledge passed down through time, now
His alone

This brought me into your world perfectl early on, and I just had to hang on for the ride. Wonderful write and an immediate addition to my AD library.

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
And how those tales do indeed thunder through your pen! Great poem.

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
I love it, Karla!!!! Strong and stunning! You go, girl!!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
timeless poetry, wonderfully penned.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
Oh I like that nick, Karla! or storm spinner ;)
This is a great spin on the tales of thunder and
lightning in your pen. Love it!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
He reached into my soul with
His hands and gave me words to
spin the tales ...

Fabulous, Karla!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
Thundering treasure!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 7, 2006
Splendid pen Stormspinner!You thunder well!;-)

eT

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 7, 2006
So that is where the StormTrooper, er, uh, I mean stormspinner came from...sorry that literally just initially slipped out and I thought it a bit freudian...ed

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Reviewed on March 7, 2006
Lady K,

The "thunder" is in your heart. You write with no pen. You write with sheer force. Well spun, as you are.

Peace and (((Hugs)))

B

Reviewed by val salazar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2006
Good job, He is an old foe. Old man weather.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 7, 2006
Karla, this is so nice~

Reviewed on March 7, 2006
StormSpinner Karla~

Thunder on! Let that pen ROLL! BRAVA; yet another fantastic write (though that picture MIGHT give me woolly nightmares tonight...THANKS.)! Well done!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn The Texas Tornado. :)

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on March 7, 2006
Awesome tale, Karla! The StormSpinner Lives!

Sage

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 7, 2006
Wow Karla love this poem and love the title, "Thunder In My Pen", should be a rock song.

Felix

Reviewed by Missy Cross (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2006
Beautiful piece! Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2006
Yes, indeed, and you are telling them with a mighty voice. Good to get this little bit of background on the StormSpinner. Gotta love it.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 7, 2006
Storm Spinner Karla, you continue to astound us with your gripping fantasy pens....Stephen King couldn't do better !
You have came away from your encounter with The Ancient One, blessed and gifted in the immeasurable insight and wisdom that pours from your pen
Love and Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on March 7, 2006
Your inner voice is tht of wisdom. Sharing it with us is your talent.

I'm listening.

Great poem and wonderful photograph to punctuate your words.

Susan


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