Mermaid (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 22, 2006

We love mermaids, and your poetry too.
Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 21, 2006

This is an amazing write and a beautiful graphic keep these coming
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed on March 21, 2006

With all of your rain, I believe that being a mermaid is much better that being a fish...superb writing Karla!
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 21, 2006

Oh how lovely, this is very beautiful Karla,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 21, 2006

The StormSpinner of the Skies now moves to the ocean realm - most interesting, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 21, 2006

Fitting write for all the rain you had!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 20, 2006

I hear Texas is experiencing flooding rains, you may be swimming to work and will have use for those fins...;) Ed

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 20, 2006

Augh but to live the dream and your words do just this . karla...hope you are well and safe in Texas now. I'm still in Florida.

be safe!
Susan

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 20, 2006

Beautiful picture, and a wonderful poem to match!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 20, 2006

Beautiful poem Karla and I love the picture, actually do you think I could use it in a book I am working on of poetry now that has a mermaid poem in it as well.

Felix

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 20, 2006

Karla,

Excellent change of pace poetry from you; immaculate and well crafted piece from your soaring muse! BRAVA; extremely well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on March 20, 2006

K.J.,

This is a charming little fantasy suggesting a much larger story. A perfect lttle tail, er, tale...

I really like this one--good write!

much love and many hugs

john+

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2006

Go take a flying . . . No, don't do that . . . Oh, go ahead, jump on in. I can see that the rain has NOT dampened your spirits, it's about time, huh?

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on March 20, 2006

With that monsoon rain that is battering Texas just now, you may well get your wish soon, Stormspinner Karla....LOLS
Get your web feet ready too...:)
Love
Peter