"What? I can't hear you! Speak up--whatcha say? HUH????"
It's State Fair time again, kids! :)
"Operator, Operator!" ~~~ The head, dizzy; tummy in r e v o l t as I am blended into scenery: all becomes a blur of life passing in front of rolling eyeballs; mouth opens in pitiful mewlings, to ask the operator in control of my fate to take things S L O W and easy.
You know how noisy midways can be... bet he heard, "KICK IT UP ANOTHER NOTCH!!!" ~~~ (c) 2006, Karla Dorman (9/28)
Having spent my younger years traveling state to state playing county and state fairs. I can truly relate to this one. As of today I never go on the rides.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
A manic fair in Slooooow Texas?
Have fun, fun, fun..
Yea I watched the folks on a fair in town today and wondered how people can be so gullible as to pay to be tortured to the point of being sick, oh well each to their own I guess.
NOW I LIKE THEM JUST FOR THE SHOWS
i STAY AWAY FROM ALL RIDES,
I LEAVE THAT TO MY GRANDKIDS
NOW IS THIER TURN TO START ENJOYING LIFE
A LOVELY PIECE ... KARLA
I stay off most of the rides now since they seem to make me more dizzy than they used to, or perhaps I no longer like dizzy as much as I once did. Either way, I go to the fair for the funnel cakes, turkey legs, hot dog on a stick, corn on the cob, snow cones and cotton candy, these days. I just can't bring myself to go on those rides that smell of barf anymore, especially if it is my own. ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Cute poem!!
Take care,
Sherry
Fair time here too and after this one leaves the State Fair comes into town.I'll be taking mt daughter Maruah. She's the thrill seeker. Me? I'm in it for the feel of straw/hay underfoot; the fair food I wouldn't touch any other time and the rich diverse aromas of cotton candy...yummy!... the farm smell of animals I love in their place. I wouldn't miss the squeel of kids and the crank of all the rides. This is one activity that lends it's own difference once a year.
Your poem is full of fairtime for fall.
Love,
Susan
Ha, Karla, won't catch me on one of those anytime soon. I enjoy watching others have fun at fairgrounds, but nah-ah, my old tummy just can't handly the thrills of those fast rides anymore. You have don't a nice job depicting this dizzying ride. Well done!
God Bless
Love, Lena
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
I am not much for fairs, but can understand the fun one can have in such events. Victor
Does the opening of the Texas State Fair have anything to do with this, Karla, hmmmm??? *grins*
In any event, a great write; very well done! BRAVA! Ah, the memories this brings back; we were young and stupid then, glad we are past that wild stage (although we don't mind a wild ride now and then today, just to keep the ol' blood and heart a pumpin'! LOL)!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Just looking at that image makes me sick Karla. Oh my ... have I had some bad experiences on those wild carnival rides. A good-un ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
The Wholly Book of Doo-Doo-Rot-on-Me is adult satirical humor featuring adult language and adult content, and the work is a parody of the Old Testament Book of Deuteronomy.
A humorous look at the world and life through my eyes.
Follow the author and his wife, as they travel the world …. several times over.
Laugh at their funny stories, self-inflicted crazy events, strange observations, wacky zoo facts and snippets
Share
Print
Save
Follow
God Bless
Michelle~
Have fun, fun, fun..
xoxoxox
Fee
selective hearing!!!funny write
pax A
Having fun on the midway makes for a delighful poem!
Eileen
i STAY AWAY FROM ALL RIDES,
I LEAVE THAT TO MY GRANDKIDS
NOW IS THIER TURN TO START ENJOYING LIFE
A LOVELY PIECE ... KARLA
LOVE & PEACE
wILLIAM
Take care,
Sherry
Myrna
Your poem is full of fairtime for fall.
Love,
Susan
You brought back some good memories!!
Love Tinka
God Bless
Love, Lena
In any event, a great write; very well done! BRAVA! Ah, the memories this brings back; we were young and stupid then, glad we are past that wild stage (although we don't mind a wild ride now and then today, just to keep the ol' blood and heart a pumpin'! LOL)!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Delightful read.
Hugs,
CJ
Can feel that squeazy feeling in the stomach already..
Way to go Karla !
Blessings
Peter
Richard Lloyd Cederberg