It Got Ugly, Real Fast (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 16, 2007

Oh this picture is enough to make me run for cover!!

I truly hope all is fine on the otherside of the globe!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 16, 2007

Storms in the soul, twisters made of guilt, and then Nature gives us a preview of what is going on inside us.
Nice little one.
Georg

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

That is one awful-looking storm. That's a wonderful poem, though. {{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

Omimous as an omen. Ugly and dark.
A-U-N-Y-I-E EMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

You've captured the spirit of the storm perfectly, Karla -- it is like an angry cat! Well done, sweet poet lady.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

Another superb poem wrenched from your fear of storms! It's uncanny isn't it how good can come from bad.;-)Write on Karla the storms are no match for your pen;-)!

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

Every one is scared severe thunderstorm. It kills the peace and beauty of the season as well as the mood of the people. I am glad that you were not hurt. Stay safe dear Karla. Your poetry is always inspirational.

Thank you.

Abdullahi

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

Powerful imagery of the potential, unstoppable brute force of nature.

'Have mercy!'
That's all we, as mere mortals, can do when faced with such a phenomena.

Regards
Dai

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

Boy, Karla, I'd hate to get into that catfight; not a pretty picture! Scary looking cloud; glad it passed us by! Vivid creativity storms from each line; very well done! BRAVA, StormSpinner!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn the Texas Tornado. :D

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

Wonderful write...scary storm, but as you say..."Have Mercy!" and mercy He provides...enjoyed this much my dear friend!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

I loved your quote up front. the analogy works well, too. Dawn

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

I always figured Mother Nature considered us to be mere insects she could swat all about at will, but I guess mice to be toy'd with works very well, too. Be careful out there!

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

Congrads on a fine well written work you have here. it was a pleasurable read and very artistic.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

Nice analogy, Karla. I do love a storm now and then but here, so far, they're not as "mean and nasty and scary" as those down your way. Thanks for sharing this. Love and peace,

Regis