Stuck (5/7/5) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 5, 2007

i completely agree. here i have october all year practically. you guys need to consider another state! cheers and prayers

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 3, 2007

Move to California or build yourself a bunker, either way, if a twister don't get you an hearthquake will, then again...I wish for you to be safe, loving storms is like loving a pack of hungry wolves.
Cheer up!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

you should think of moving to new york ... it does get hot but it never gets monotonous ... all the seasons are a treat ....

keep cool, Karla ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

wow you sure are ahead of yourself, spring isn't even over and you want autumn;-)Keep that up Karla and you'll be old before you know it;-)lol...Excellent write!

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Grass always seems greener on the other side.Enjoyed

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

LOL come to Cali we are having some strange weather here too, rain one day, unimaginable heat the next it is sheer craziness
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

We've had a few storms, but nothing severe...I always dread the spring storms, but enjoy the summer and fall, winter I dread...travel is treacherous here in the winter! Enjoyed this well written write my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Lovely pen..Hugsssss

Reviewed by Kwame Mutulu (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

I love all the seasons, but this was a nice read. I can picture the summer here already.. HEAT!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Yup can understand that...BTW if I can get hold of two old Abilene friends I'll be over, but no luck yet. Julie and Renata, even Lisa, used to work at the Embassy suites in 87 by the mall, now known as MCM Elegante Suites.... seya somewhen...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Spring is attempting it's appearance here, and summer will following. After this winter I have to say, Bring it on! :-)

However; I do understand your love for fall, it is a beautiful season!

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Me too! And I love your Haiku to.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Your poem "Stuck" touches on the situation here. We are in a drought that leaves the grass like parched straw and no rain is in sight.

You've written an expressive write about the weather.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Every season has its downside. There's something good in all of them.

Carmen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Karla~

I hear ya; I don't like spring (too stormy here...and no freakin' basements! NUTZ!), and summer here (too freekin' hot!! YUCKO!); bring on the fall and winter! Very well written, and the pic captures the essence of this poem perfectly! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sis, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Karla --

Another gem. Autumn is my favorite season, but we are not as extreme here of course.

hugs,
Kathy

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Very very beautiful. You captured vivid images of Spring and summer. I love Fall, too. What a lovely poem you penned here