Jack's World (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

A Kool write Karla
thanks for sharing
"BUT"
can't feel sorry for a punkin head
He'll be back next year, like clock work
Peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Excellent write, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Jack's world - smashed and abandoned. Is there more to this poem than meets the halloween eye?

Kathy

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Poor Jack, this is sad. Ah the life of a pumpkin.
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Sad in a way. Good write.

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Tell Jack not to go a head with the opera tion! He might find him self quart ered up in to pie ces. --Charlie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

This is a very sad story, makes me ponder of someone smashing ones heart.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Poor Little pumpkin smashed and discarded...at least he can't feel much with his brain gone.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Alas, Poor Jack; I knew him well...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Jack's a twit, gut him, the sooner the better . . . Rotten )(#!%#

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Should have ended its life in a pumpkin pai!!!!!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

So sad but so true...poor Jack.

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

You take us into Jack's world, Karla, with cleverness and wit, yet with a hint of sadness. Very well penned; brava~ Happy Boo Day to you too!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Cute and well said Karla.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on October 29, 2007

This is so true and sad. Karla, you are very thoughtful!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 29, 2007

pretty sad for old jack-well written!

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on October 29, 2007

Poor ol' Jack has a rough day, eh?
Nice job, Karla!
R~