The Power Of Persuasion (Revised) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on December 29, 2007

What would we do without him?

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

{{Yaaawwwnnnn}} for me it's almost time for bed (again). Glad I caught this one, Karla.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

I like this composition... "The Power Of Persuasion (Revised)" glows.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

Excellent write keep these coming
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

You are defibefore the alarm get the sun in my face nitely a nature girl! I goes off. Happy Blessings!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

You do those so well Karla, I see a book in your future!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

Ya know you could always put aluminum foil over your windows. Not so stylish, but oh so redneck :+)....He he

Walt

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

A warm sunny friend,, and lover,,wow,,,,,
:) Nice write Karla,,,
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

An offering with an up beat!!

Gooooodmorning to you too!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

...sunny thoughts of an uncommon relationship...become bright.
nice one Karla...
John

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

Just a friendly morning wake-up call...good one, Karla.
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

a clever write-

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

Nice visuals in the midst of all this confusion . . .

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

Wonderful words you pen this fine sunny morning, Karla! Very well done; brava! Enjoyed this one!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

I love this! Great visuals. I got confused in all the pronouns though, maybe keep this one third-person?-- try calling "I" she and "it" he... what would happen? --Charlie (You know I only pick on the ones I really, really like...)

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

Enjoyed this my friend...loved the thoughts behind, within, and those that are left lingering on my mind!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

And quite often, a truly good friend! Now WAAAAAAAKKKKKKKE UPPPPPP!