Fanta C (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 10, 2008

I actually see one big heart there, Karla. I hope you'll be okay on Valentine's day. You always have us! I read your message and let me tell you, that you will be missed!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

it's okay. Sometimes it's better to be alone than to be miserable. I love the clouds here. It looks like fingers beckoning, "Come here".
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

I'm amazed how nature inspires you to write about so many topics, Karla. I like how these two verses show a dramatic contrast. Nice!
Sheila

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

The picture does look loke twl hearts in a sky of blue. A soft pognant poem......M

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

No you don't be awakening alone, not if you have a big chocolate heart to dip a sorrow or two in them.
Valentine stinks!!!

Georg

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

A beautiful write, thank you for sharing, a great picture as well
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Yes Karla, the photo does remind us of two hearts drifting apart. I can feel your emptiness in this writing and a wish for love to come your way.

Reviewed by Glen Schulz

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Beautiful poem of love and emptiness both, Karla. And a nice picture too, I see a couple dancing a tango, she is on the left.
You are never alone :)
*Glen*

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

good old reality--it stinks sometimes

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

There's a reason I refer to Valentines Day as "Single Persons Awareness Day." You described it here. Good work! Rebecca

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Karla, this is sooooooooo good!

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

...perhaps to hold one heart...for one day only...would not be the truest heart to hold.
well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Look at it another way... You are free from VD day...

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Karla~

I hate Valentine's Day, as you know. It has nothing but heartache for me; having nobody doesn't help. At least I have you; will you be MY Valentine?? I'll be yours if you say yes! :) Very well penned and imaged; love the picture!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

i see angels in the picture :)
ahh...why be sad, when you are with the most important person you'll ever share your life with...yourself...tell yourself i love you and give yourself a hug, and one from me too.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Waking up to some hairy guy burping and farting on Valentine's Day is overrated . . . At least I found it to be so . . . LOL . . . Having fun today . . . So sue me . . . LOL

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

A knock out duo Karla! You get right to
the hollow ache with your keen perception!

kove
ET

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

I love it!
So soft and flowing-- but ends with a bite
Cryssa

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

So bittersweet Karla, a lovely pen.