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Taking a Chance
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Hey, someone's got to make the first move! :)


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alone once again
why am i surprised
like this every year

not this one:  taking
a chance this time by
making the first move -

be my Valentine?

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (2/13)


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 Reviews of "Taking a Chance"
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Beautiful inspirational write!
Hope your Valentine was special as your heart is Karla!
Your a risk taker, it shows throughout your lines and thoughts!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Love, Warrior Lady Sheooxoo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
I would sure say yes as an AD friend, Karla, and if I didn't belong to my beloved life companion, I'd be sayin' , knowing already your big heart and lovely personality, be lookin' my way Ms. Dorman. So, that's another way of saying take that chance with the precaution that chances can become choices. I see below that men can be brutal, but sometimes we choose not to be, and sometimes the women are brutal too.. Good Valentine poem too....Jerry

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
That's a mighty big heart to share... I'll take a healthy portion. --Charlie

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Karla, thanks & Happy Valentine's Day to you too! This is as nice as it gets.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
i like this--taking that step for yourself!!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Karla, I stopped looking or hoping for love a long time ago, it only leads to heartache. I prefer the company of animals and some friends. They aren't as brutal as men can be. With that said--Happy Valentine's Day. ~ Sara

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
One has to admire those who take the chance, God Bless, Karla, love Holly

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
If we don't take chances then we will always be alone Karla. Love is in the air for everyone, we just have to look in the right direction.
Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Taking a Chance is often a wonderful thing to do!

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
Well.... you know my thoughts about Valentine's day by now, Karla. See what this mess brings? More longing to the lonely!
Wish I could be your Valentine.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
I'll be, but the distance!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
You are tempting me so therefore I am compel to say
((((((((((((((YES))))))))))
Happy Valentine's Day
Peace & Love Be with you

William

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
I'll gladly be your Valentine. Will you be mine?

Steve will be gone to a firework's convention, so I'll be alone, too. Bummer, but oh well ... life goes on.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by G Bergeron (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
What? Eros didn't visit you yet? He stuck me like a rabid pin-cushion. anyway, great little write, you're everyone's valentine.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
Knocking on wood for you and sending Cupid's arrows!

Gina

Reviewed on February 13, 2008
Of COURSE. Of course I'll be your Valentine, Karla; you don't even have to ask!

Delightful write of longing; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Selene Skye
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
So sweet the theme, so heartfelt and lyrical the verse. It's that chance that is the utmost uncertainty in life. It can go either way.


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