Rude Awakening (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Walk with uncertainty 'till the sun's rays, greet you and say, hey. Be ever vigilant to your wild weather conditions. Be safe. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

There, in the picture, are mean clouds if I ever see ones, but after been slapped a few times by typhoons in the shoth seas and Chine seas and mean looking cloudly sky just looks like a pathetic effort to shout Booooohh! to a charging bull.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

What a wake-up call...*smile*

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Marvelous weather poem and the pic is wonderful, too. Thanks dear friend and sister

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

...strong visuals...make me want to miss the morning...and skip right into the afternoon...could it be better?
well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

The picture speaks volumes as does the poem
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

What a pictrue!!!! Once again you have captured mother natures wrath in your words......M

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

Your poor thing. Sounds like just the kind of weather I enjoy. Been to Texas several times in the last few years and I enjoyed the storms. Love driving in them too. We've decided to move out of snow country. Maybe we'll look into Texas. Calm down, enjoy God's wondrous weather and have a great day Karla. Wel done my friend.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

Karla, I really like that first line.LOL
You really do put lots of weather sounds, images, and actions in your storm poems. Well done.

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

A sleeping poem. This part is so full of visual sweets: "rain blowing sideways on mad sheets of wind, a tornado of sound." Good stuff, Karla. --charlie

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

What an awful way to begin a morning indeed!!! Be safe my dear...

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

Karla~

Boy, that is one uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugly sky!! MAN! Glad the storms have moved on; rude awakening is RIGHT! Very well penned/photographed! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sis, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

We are continuing to get rain today. Lucky for us the thunder and the lightnings had stopped.

Wishing you and Karen a wonderful weekend!!!

Sandie May :o)

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

Keep that pretty head down, Karla until it passes. It will pass. Love, Bonnie