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The Creator's Morning
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... take sky into My lap for a morning of sewing. ....

Image (c) 2008, Karla Dorman


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Thread lightning through needle, take
sky into My lap for a morning of sewing.
Hard making storms:  careful!  Don't
overfill:  clouds rip very easily.  A bit
more thunder and rain and --- there.
Perfect.  Now to align their dark edges
to fit against the striations of purple
and green:  will be pretty, once I get it
done.  And then I'll stretch it across
the Heavens and watch the Humans
freak:  except for a select few, they 
don't know how much work I put into
this.  They wouldn't know beauty if it
came, slapped them upside the head.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (8/2)

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 Reviews of "The Creator's Morning"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
-- a seamstress of considerable aplomb my dear -- weather woven so neatly -- poem written so cleverly -- may you have only happy storms this day -- JMW

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 5, 2008
very creative-enjoyed!

Reviewed on August 4, 2008
right some wouldn't Karla, nice creative writing my dear

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
Karla, your poem is so characteristic of what many of us do--we let our minds wander when we are busy doing things. You've made a metaphor by associating the clouds, thunder and lightning to threading a needle and sewing. I call that "doing" by association. Excellent write.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
...another one of my favorites Karla...images wonderfully penned become the fabric of fine pieces...you create.
John

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
A cutie by a cutie! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
You sew beautifully Karla. Can I hire you?;-)...ET

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
In the morning, early, very, when you get outside on the predawn light, before the aroma of the new brewed coffee reach your nose, don't you wonder if God yawns like you do just at that very moment?

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
Ah perhaps not but if "the Man" decides to paint a picture of the race track with #48 Jimmie Johnson crossing the finish line under a checkered flag, this is one cowboy that will sit up and pay attention.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
They wouldn't know beauty if it
came, slapped them upside the head.

How sadly true, for so many in our world today.

Reviewed on August 3, 2008
Hello Karla,

Wonderful embroidery in picturesque words! Got my computer back - so lets hug with this piece, my friend. God bless you always.

Cynthia

Reviewed on August 2, 2008
Excellent write here Karla, I really enjoyed reading this one
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
Delightful sewing and weaving of images, just wonderful, Karla.
John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
Wow Karla you sure sewed this together, no seams left undone. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
This one reminds me of one of the Chinese Legends that there is a princess in the sky's kingdom, who is knitting out a beautiful quilt for the sky. but sometimes the storms do come around and destroy what she has woven.

Great write, Karla!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
Very creative Karla. I do enjoy the wrath of God through His storms; long as no one is hurt and there's no damage. The louder the thunder, brighter the lightning, and fiercer the winds, the better. The awesome beauty of it all is absolutely amazing. Well done my friend. God bless.

Reviewed on August 2, 2008
Clever outtake on God's creation behind the storm clouds. Very well penned/illustrated; brava, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
Love the spinning of the storm :) and you're right most people are so unaware and unappreciative.

Love, Janet xoxoxo


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