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Hungry Is the ... Sky?
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Hungry, it was, the sky - should
have heard its belly growl as
it searched for something to eat:
prayed it wasn't me.  It thumped
around, knocking clouds about
in its frenzy:  stayed down, low,
out of its way.  Must have found
something, because it moved on ...

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (6/2)

 


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 Reviews of "Hungry Is the ... Sky?"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
Another unique perspective of a storm, Karla. Well done. I like your new home-page picture, too. Cute:) Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on June 3, 2009
Sometimes, Karla, fewer words say the most and you, unlike me, are able to draw the pictures we see with minimal words.... I saw that big, bad, rumbling cloud.
Mark

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 3, 2009
... can feel that belly-rumble from here, Karla... Fee Fi Fo Fum... glad he ain't got YOU in his tum! :)) Stay safe! xx

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on June 3, 2009
Powerful looking storm clouds Karla, the photo captured it beautifullly...nice writing
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 3, 2009
Boy, that looks hungry... awesome power of a thunder head!
Very nice pen, Karla!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2009
Great writing and picture is great also sweet lady...stay safe and well..Hugsss

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 3, 2009
It sounds like a lot of soup to me, I hope you are holding a spoon!

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 3, 2009
Best to hide when that old sky is hungry!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
we had quite a storm as well! hail and thunder and lightning!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
Fantastic image and poem karla,you really have this down to a science! Brava!...ET

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
I like this image and picture of the sky as being a living entity capable of chosing who or what it will devour. Good one Karla
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
I loved yoru creativity with this one. Great poem karla!

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
Karla,
Greedy and insatiable nature, you create the image and mood so well.
John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
Karla, great viusals in this..sure glad he moved on..lol

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
Leaving behind rolling thunder
Excellent write Karla

William

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
Love at first bite.lol love it, hugs, J'nia

Reviewed on June 2, 2009
I love this, Karla! I can just visualize the storm searching and sniffing for a morsel.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
Great one, Karla.

Reviewed by rudi massyn (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
Simple and accurate. sometimes the simple beauty around us inspire the greatest of works. Congratulations on being able to write a poem like this.
Regards
Rudi Massyn

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
The sky in all its moods, and you capture all of them.
Karla, that's a stormy neighborhood you live in. Does
the belly growl never cease? - Be safe. -gene..

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 2, 2009
Nothing like a good meal fried with lightening and with thunder as a second course...e

Reviewed on June 2, 2009
Wow you guys are having some interesting weather, a great write, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed on June 2, 2009
Karla~

Wow, you've given me goosebumps on top of my goosebumps with this chilling write! To think the storm as stalking you as its prey...WOW! Nightmare city! Excellent write, and I can't wait for the piccy or video! BRAVA! Keep these storm chases coming (but above all, please stay safe!!)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, the (reluctant) chase partner, Karen Lynn. :0 *screaming*


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