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The Final Salute
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... Freedom isn't free --- never has been, never will be. It exacts a terrible price, paid in blood. ....


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Pow:  right between the eyes.  Makes you
uncomfortable?  Don't want to think about
it?  Too bad:  bet he wasn't, either:  oh, it
was there, death, ticking in his mind, but he

didn't dwell on it.  Bet his last thoughts 
were of loved ones and home.  He believed
he could make a difference:  did, just not 
the way he imagined.  Freedom isn't free --- 

never has been, never will be.  It exacts a
terrible price, paid in blood.  Every day
should be Veteran's and Memorial Day, not
just when convenient:  soldiers don't stop

dying when the final salute has been made.
There is always another to fill his boots. 
Would you be willing to lay down your life
for your loved ones and for the freedoms

you have?  Or would you rather forget?  We
owe him this much, if not more:  remember
all who've sacrificed health, body and mind
in service to our Nation.  War is hell:  but it
 
would be a hell of a lot worse if we depended
on protesters and those who don't give a
damn.  Well, I do:  here to remind you, ready
or not.  It's the least I can do for what he did.

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (11/8)


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 Reviews of "The Final Salute"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 23, 2009
well said

Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
Stunning. I like the format you chose for this piece.

Reviewed on November 10, 2009
Amen! And I'll never forget.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 9, 2009
I don't want to forget. And I won't. But I won't dismiss protester's wishes to bring our troops home as a bad thing. We all want them home when the time is right. Now would be good. But I don't have the big picture, and I'm afraid only Dwight Eisenhower's ghost does, and he's not happy. Patrick

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 9, 2009
Protesters have their place, but they don't do well against an enemy hell bent on killing.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 9, 2009
Bravo! We have a terrible tendency to turn away from the painful thigs,and it takes someone with dogged persiistence ,like you to keep reminding us! Thanks Karla!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 9, 2009
And out there will be always the grave of an unknown soldier.

Georg


Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
There is nothing more sad than a pair of empty boots. His/her life engrained within the leather, the mud and blood tell the story of their final days and moments. They did it for you and for me, for honor and for Country with courage that exceeded their fear. God Bless each and every Veteran. Thank you for remembering them, what they do and what the gave, in the name of freedom for us all.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
well expressed reminder to us all

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
I can always rely on you to give us all Patriotic poetry when we need it and a kick in the butt, sometimes, too. We always can use it!

Love, peace and harmony,
Susan

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
Powerful Karla. "Right between the eyes" as you always say.

Reviewed on November 8, 2009
Karla this is great, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
Great reminder once again, Karla. Well done.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
Thank you for this moving and most articulate memorial, Karla.
And, of course, thank you for your service to your country.
I continue to wish for the day that war would be obsolete.

-gene.

Reviewed on November 8, 2009
POW!! Right between the eyes; that's the way it should be. We'd best remember our soldiers, and not just when convenient. May God have mercy on those who would rather forget; shame on them! Thank YOU for serving our nation, and thank YOU for this powerful reminder! Very well penned; this needs to be shouted from the rooftops!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( *tears!*

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
You just keep right on reminding us, Karla, and may your words fall heavily on those who most need to hear them. Rebecca

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
There are many like this brave one, without them we would not be free. And now our freedom is being slowly taken from us, not by soldiers, but by insane politicians and an apathetic America. I sense, however, that we are beginning to awaken. I hope to God we are, for if not, we are lost.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
Great reminder it is important that we never forget those that have fought for us and still do.


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