Karla, I suppose you are always on your mind? -- clever piece of work here -- and a brave gal you are to face your fears -- I know you will win -- or will you win? -- peace and love to you my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Karla,
...paranoia may annoy ya but schizophrenia can come between ya...love the mono-dialogue throughout, the I will/I won't moments of self- challenge and fear, a great approach, and you're a very brave woman!
How cleverly done, Karla...I love the "Not Me"..."Oh, Yes YOU!" comedic attitude in this poem! But...jimminy...are you REALLY going on two Storm Chase this next year...like to Oklahoma and/or Kansas???
May the Powers be with you, my friend!
Blessings and Love - Micke
(yes, I'm finally able to return to some commenting)
So glad that you and you got that resolved, Karla.
I'd love to see you but please don't chase that storm
thisaway. -gene.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
The committee in our heads. God, what noise. Don't worry. Just walk through the fear. I'd love to go on a chase. Always wanted to in fact. Great writing.
The discussion and the debate rages inside your head / You have conquered your fears / No matter what the wimp says, you have conquered your fears / Come on 2010 / Kicking storms asses and taking names . . .
I liked this Karla. Honest!
You only have two in your head?
You're lucky! Sometimes the noise
in my brain is like a sports event at
a stadium.
Blessings ...
r
Fractured Frazzled Folk Fables and Fairy Farces is adult literature that satirizes famous children's stories, fables and fairy tales. The work is Jay Dubya's twenty-first e-book available in Amazon Kindle and Barnes and Noble Nook.
P.S. Love your new pic. So cute! Hugs,
Sheila
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Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose
...paranoia may annoy ya but schizophrenia can come between ya...love the mono-dialogue throughout, the I will/I won't moments of self- challenge and fear, a great approach, and you're a very brave woman!
John
May the Powers be with you, my friend!
Blessings and Love - Micke
(yes, I'm finally able to return to some commenting)
I'd love to see you but please don't chase that storm
thisaway. -gene.
GOD BLESS
Tony
Triple cheers,
Dan
You only have two in your head?
You're lucky! Sometimes the noise
in my brain is like a sports event at
a stadium.
Blessings ...
r
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
That sounds pretty good to me!
Georg