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It Was Just Me and the Flag
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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The American flag does not fly because the wind moves past it. The American flag flies from the last breath of each military member who has died protecting it. American soldiers don't fight because they hate what's in front of them ... they fight because they love what's behind them. ~ Jennifer Ivory McBride Stevenson.

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It was just me and the flag:
it stood straight out, almost
at the position of attention,
giving honor to those whose
last breath wove the banner.
No sound, except the military
precision in each snap in
the wind:  perhaps heroes
marching by.  Sweat ran
down my face, joining tears
already there:  humbled
by their presence, I wept.

(c) 2011, Karla Dorman (5/30)


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 Reviews of "It Was Just Me and the Flag"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 5, 2011
Beautiful weaving of the threads of significance within the furls of our flag...you have honored it so.

Reviewed on June 5, 2011
As always you capture the very essence of reality. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 1, 2011
Very well done Karla.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on May 31, 2011
KARLA ... WELL DONE, PATRIOT ...

WE SALUTE YOU !

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 31, 2011
Beautiful!! You are quite a poet...
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 31, 2011
Moving testatment, Karla, to the Flag and for whom it waves. -gene.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2011
super!! tremendous poetry karla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on May 31, 2011
Karla, you've hit a homerun with this one. Well done, my friend. Thanks Dick

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 31, 2011
This is beautiful and so full of the gratitude that we, as Americans , feel toward our fallen soldiers throughout time.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on May 31, 2011
I UNDERSTAND YOUR TEARS...FOR WE ARE STILL STANDING, KARLA. SO MANY TIMES I REFLECT AND RALIZE THAT I COULD HAVE HAD A LOVED ONE LYING IN ARLINGTON BUT GOD CHOSE TO BRING HER BACK HOME SAFE. THUS, TO THE BRAVE ONES WHO HAVE...AND STILL ARE...PAYING THE PRICE I SAY, THANK YOU. GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2011
Excellent poem sweet lady...stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 31, 2011
Fantastic write, Karla.

Reviewed on May 30, 2011
Karla this is absolutely amazing, I think this is one of your best, and I like all of your poems, but wow does this one speak volumes, thank you for your service, and thank you for honoring those who served
In Christs Love
Michelle!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 30, 2011
Profound and powerful for all who served past and present. Godspeed to all...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 30, 2011
Yes, a powerful statement from a wonderful young lady...by the way, we are getting 90 some degree weather for the next few days, so stop sending it up this way as I know its coming from you...e

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2011

There is nothing quite like watching a flag being buffeted by the wind. Yes, it will bring a tear. And if it doesn't you're no damn good.

Reviewed on May 30, 2011
Powerful write, Karla, and that picture says volumes! God bless America again, and God bless those who serve(d), such as yourself! And God bless the families who lost loved ones in battle or those whose military members now march on Heaven's battlefield ... they will never be forgotten by THIS grateful American Patriot .... Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :) +SALUTE!!+

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on May 30, 2011
Just lovely! An emotional time, indeed. Joy L. Hale


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