Nice touch Dawn...autumn is such a nice new beginning, change...we all need those seasonal changes to enjoy and to reflect upon the ending and the desires for them to return...
YES!!! I am soooo and autumn/winter person, Miss Sun Allergy as I am, and I looooooooooooooove this poem, but then, I always love your work, Dawn~ xxxx Michelle
Lovely piece Dawn! Autumn is my favorite season, so I am always glad when it arrives...each season has its own beauty, its own offerings, all of which are to be cherished. Enjoyable read! ~Hugs, Elizabeth
a beautifully written piece Dawn
Here I am waiting for the gives of Fall
the scent, that lingers in the air
the taste of holiday treats,
the sights I wait for with great anticipation,
to behold my eyes.......
love & peace be with you
...AND YOU HAVE EXPRESSED YOUR BITTERSWEET FEELINGS SO ARTICALLY. DONE SO VERY WELL...YOU NEVER DISAPPOINT YOUR READERS. THANKS FOR SHARING, MUCH LOVE AND BLESSINGS....JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Dear Dawn, I visited your den for the first time and I found that your writes are deep and well expressed. Thank you for sharing your most precious gift. Love, Emile
Dawn, Dawn, Dawn, each season has such beauty, the dark nights are the cosy nights, the autumn has a beauty of solitude and we only love summer thanks to the beauty of the other seasons.
You can go play conkers and catching leaves 'neath the full moon light.
How gently, subtly you ease us into the season, Dawn.
I'd love to be able to sleep comfortably with my window open at night; unfortunately it's too humid all the year round. Where I am, I miss the seasons and their changing quilts.
A lovely picture and you capture the essence of its autumn scene and the mood of the season. With some leaves already falling, I, too, feel a sense of spring passing into autumn.
What a refreshing feeling! We haven't had that yet, summer is still beating hard, but I'm looking forward to it by next month.
Mary
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2010
I was thinking the same thing yesterday by the Pacific Ocean. You can see a slight change of water color and feel a small bite in the wind as autumn slowly creeps ashore. It's actually my favorite time of year. Nice poem Dawn.
Totally with you in this, Dawn, being a sunshine-type BUT, having been blessed with a wonderful, lengthy period of dry and fair climes, I'm ready for the first time in many years to feel the contrasting sensual swell in the elements that are now daily presenting. Your words move us into this phase of transition nicely. xx
Enchanting, mysterious, soft ~
And so many things seem to drift in that open window as I read this...wisdom, the vast unknown, the smell of autumn leaves and some peach pie ~
Blessings,
Christine
Dawn, Embrace this new season to give you joy for the gifts that will arrive at your door. You are blessed and will receive many more blessings as the colors change in your world.
Nice work, reminding us of the seasons that change. Autumn makes me think of winter which I really don't think I'll enjoy. But then when its here, I find more peace than I expect!
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Regis
is nothing like the Fall at the South Jersey Shore. -gene.
Here I am waiting for the gives of Fall
the scent, that lingers in the air
the taste of holiday treats,
the sights I wait for with great anticipation,
to behold my eyes.......
love & peace be with you
William
Blessings to you
David
You can go play conkers and catching leaves 'neath the full moon light.
Beaut of a write from a beautiful lass. x
I'd love to be able to sleep comfortably with my window open at night; unfortunately it's too humid all the year round. Where I am, I miss the seasons and their changing quilts.
John
What a refreshing feeling! We haven't had that yet, summer is still beating hard, but I'm looking forward to it by next month.
Mary
And so many things seem to drift in that open window as I read this...wisdom, the vast unknown, the smell of autumn leaves and some peach pie ~
Blessings,
Christine
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Peace,
Dayvid