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Majestic Wonders/Did Tom die Loving Me?Sept28,08
by Lois J. Christensen → (All Poetry by Lois J. Christensen)
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Observations of the World around you.
Our anniversary coming up Oct 6.


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Majestic Wonders

It's breathtaking particularly the Mountains, when the sun sets.

The sky glows with the most beautiful colors.

Violet, rose, stuning.
A gold light is so luminous and clear too.

Take note of your surroundings and see that fresh beauty of a new day.

Prayers the sublimest strains that reach.

The Majesty on High.

Have you been kissed by the waning moon and creamed. Looking into the sun,

Majesty is seeing the shadow of an eagle overhead,

The great bird swooping up toward the eyrie in the mountains - freedom is.

Seeing the ships in the harbor,

Worshipping the lady with adulations.

Precious jewels such as diamonds, rubies, emeralds, topaz and more.

A cozy fire presenting a dancing flaming  praisingly cozy atmosphere.

The natives of white diseases in far away countries.
Pray the sublimest strains that reach the Majesty on High

 

AN Anniversary tribute to my Tom

 DID TOMDIE lOVING ME?

 ON OUR ANNIVERSARY DATE WHICH WILL BE OCT 6,
i QUESTION THIS.
HE ALWAYS TOOK SO MUCH CARE OF ME

HE BROUGHT ME WATER IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT OR A GLASS OF ICED TEA.

HE COVERED ME UP WHEN i THREW THE COVERS OFF.

HE DID THIS TIL THE AFTERNOON OF THE DAY HE TOOK OFF.

tO BE WITH THE LORD HIS SAVIOR IN HEAVEN.

 

HE'D LET ME GO AWAY WHENEVER I WANTED, i COULD TAKE OFF OVERNIGHT OR FOR WEEKS,

WHEN NEEDED,wITH NO ARGUING FROM HIM WHICH HE'D NOT SEEK.

i DO BELIEVE HE LOVED ME TRULY,

BUT HE DIED FROM HIS BAD HABIT WHICH WAS CIGARETTE SMOKING DULY.

NOW i'VE THE ANSWER TO THAT QUESTION,
i CAN GO ON ANOTHER YEAR WITHOUT HESITATION.


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 Reviews of "Majestic Wonders/Did Tom die Loving Me?Sept28,08"
Reviewed by sara prentis (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2009
No words, just a heart filled with emotions.
God Bless You. Beautiful.
s

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
...worshipping the lady of adulations... like that line a great deal.
Adulations like undulations, rhythmic with strong undercurrents.
Cheers J'nia

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
Oh my..this is so beautiful...oh myyyyyyyyy..what a beautiful heart and soul you have sweet lady...its all over this page...have a wonderful and safe day...Hugsssss

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
You're seeing it, the beauty all around, and seeing it so majestically!

Reviewed on September 17, 2008
Beautiful imageries!!! You have taken your readers over there!!! Thank you Lois!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Oh Lois this is beautiful written with such delicate realization of true beauty just like the poem. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on August 29, 2008
Your words painted a very beautiful
Canvas of golden memories and sadness!!
Your words brought tears to my heart!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning Star

Reviewed by Sam Stillhere..
Reviewed on August 29, 2008
these words are very special memories that when read flow along like a beautiful but very sad song.... It left me with tears, I just loved it....

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
Sweet write. Touches the heart.

Reviewed on August 4, 2008
a touching personal poem Lois, nicely constructed. Go on outside, just take you a Louisville slugger

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
How thankful we have to be that we even have memories and are not mere robots!!!! Memory capacity, in other word!!!! touchingly expressed.

Reviewed on August 4, 2008
Lois this is so beautiful and bittersweet, brought tears to my heart and eyes.

Reviewed by Denise Nowakowski
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
Hi Lois,
I feel your sadness and pain. It is OK to ache and be sad. Take your time and you will be glad - one day. The Lord is always by your side. Keep on writing. If you feel like it have a look at my "TOMORROW".
Denise

Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
I feel your pain and your love and God will protedt your heart! Don't be afraid to sit on your porch because the universe and you are one. Your husband will be etched in your heart forever and his beauty lives through you. When we meet our Lord and Savior Jesus at the banquet in the sky. We will rejoice with family, friends, and relatives and forever be with the Lord. Don't die my sister but live because of love and through the Lord. Great poems such as this one awaits for you to write! Peace!!!

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
A lovely memory shared through verse, a quiet place to sit and ponder. HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
love makes the world go round

brava

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
You sure have a lovely heart...I too love LOVE POEMS!

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
This poem is so lovely, and it gives me a picture of you... the sweet and loving woman behind the words. Your Tom must have been very special; as I know that kind of love too... When it's gone, we have to go thru many stages...but mainly...there comes a day when the love is tucked away in that priceless vault within our memory...treasured and taken out when we need to rebuild and freshen our strength to keep moving forward. Lois, one day you will find another type of love...maybe not the precious whisper love, but love nonetheless.. We must move on... You told me that you are not pretty, but that Tom loved you like you were so special... Well, I don't know who told you that you are not pretty...because they don't know doodleeeee.... You are pretty, and you are beautiful in ways that many of us would gladly accept in a heartbeat! Stay laughing and kind and with a heart that is pure like yours.... it shows in your writing... that is the honest natural type.... bless you and your generous spirit. lindalaw

Reviewed by Debra Baker
Reviewed on July 9, 2008
Lois, a lovely write. Love never leaves the heart no matter the circumstance. Thank you for sharing this beautiful insight an image...of delight

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 8, 2008
Beautiful image, and a warm and delightful write. Agape love will outlast all the others too. Amen! blessings ...

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on July 7, 2008
What a heartfelt, sweet poem.
I understand your feelings, there is
sadness, but also hope and dreams.

Axilea

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 14, 2008
Keeping busy is good for the soul .. Its good to do so and just not sit and stagnate.. Writing lets one release inner feelings , and also pay homeage to those we love...M

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
I think it is good to be busy. I never seem to find enough time to do all that I want to do. This poem is apt for many, Lois. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Katie Gabrielle
Reviewed on June 6, 2008
I love this poem because it is so real and human...you are
indeed a lovely friend and you write from your heart...A
good heart that cares about someone else...a stranger
that you reach out and care...That is rare my friend
Always be who you are and you can't go wrong...Let them
wonder why you are always smiling...its because giving
is better...keep the sunshine and keep busy...

trust me your sunshine is felt by all who know you!

katie

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Keeping busy is great for you
also keeps you feeling younger
Love & peace

William

Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Blessings to you Lois, wishing you peace in your heart. I think you are doing a great job keeping busy. Going out with friends and all fills the empty space. Prayers are always so special, surely you have a few hobbies here and there too, yes?

It is GOOD to write about your deepest thoughts, or most emotional ones. Perhaps the one's that hurt and trouble us the most, God has a very mysterious way of turning those pains and sufferings into masterpieces. I know you have been giving it a try, next thing you know you will have a book full.

Treat yourself to TLC, spa, night on the town to meet new friends,
~Gwendolyn




Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on June 3, 2008
Interesting and sad. It's lonely to be alone but I think you are doing all you can to get by. Hope things change for you. Liz


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