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Light the Candles
by Sue Hess → (All Poetry by Sue Hess)
  
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He took her from the street
Few words were even spoken
As they walked to
The old hotel on the corner
He paid for the room
While she waited on the steps
By the hour she was sure
It shouldn’t take that long
Closing the door
Behind them
He began undressing
Hardly even glancing her way
As she stood awkwardly and watched
A lonely roach crawl slowly up the wall
Knowing it was inevitable
She joined him
Tossing her clothes on a rickety chair
she crawled onto the stained and
sagging bed
next to the stained and sagging man
who awaited her
she closed her eyes and prayed for it to be over
for him to not ask her name
why she was here
just do it and go away
she was 14 today
and she should have been in dress of silk
blowing birthday candles from a
cake with pink icing
but instead she was here
in a hell hole in some stinking city
losing her virginity
for twenty dollars cash
because her baby sister
was at home crying
because they had no milk



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Note: Children are never old enough to decide to become sexually active with an adult, it is abuse plain and simple whether it is prostitution or seduction! I wrote this in protest of this kind of situation, not to exploit it, i hope you all know that!

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 Reviews of "Light the Candles"
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on June 25, 2002
Sue... I admire your writing style... never change...Great write!!!!!

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2002
A very true write hun...it's all easy to oppose but the circumstances play a very important role. I just pray that no one feels so deprived to reach this level of downgrading onself. Truthful write, loved it!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 24, 2002
very well written...

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on June 24, 2002
I know of this kind of situation all to well and I am with you on this, but this is so real and so true.... very powerful!!!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on June 24, 2002
This is sad and tragic.
Luv from kay.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 24, 2002
You do this type so well it hurts...

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on June 24, 2002
scary stuff you write of here, but so sadly true. my heart breaks for these babies
josie


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