Free me (poem) by rite on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 29, 2007

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 1, 2006

Tis gave me an impression of mortal flesh groaning to be changed into the immortal body of light, which I believe can be done through certain DNA and divine knowledge.
You have so much wisdom and insight that I believe you know how this is done.
Judy Meeker

Reviewed by Poetry Deborah

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Thank you...Amen!

Deborah :o)))

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 3, 2006

Rage,

When we are at our weakest, He is our Strength. A prayer, very well written!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on February 3, 2006

Powerfully vulnerable; masterfully expressed. Much enjoyed.
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran

Reviewed on February 1, 2006

Good write!

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on February 1, 2006

Powerful poem with strong spritual foundations. Thanks for sharing this offering

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on January 31, 2006

Hello, Rage. This is a strong plea-poem, admitting to still-needed guidance to survive life with that gasping need we feel when we don't fulfill the need we feel.

See? You've shown me an understanding of being utterly confusedly human, in a metaphysical background.

'Forgive me, 'Father', for I have sinned...'

I've wondered all my life if it could be so easy.

With respect,

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on January 31, 2006

Truly a prayer for our time. Wonderful and full of faith in the Creator to save us all. Thank, Rage.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on January 31, 2006

A very wonderful and inspiring write! Yes, it has been a long time since I've read your works. Welcome back!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 31, 2006

Excellent write, Rage; so good to see you here again! I have missed you! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2006

So much spiritual seeking is revealed inside this poem of power. The surrender always brings the light needed to rise above the darkness this is powerful work ty for sharing this piece.

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on January 30, 2006

I do agree absolutely for God doesn't see u as a color, we bleed the same color as I shared at my first book signing. God bless you in all you do and write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 30, 2006

Very deep...hope you are okay...long time no see...welcome back!!

Your poem moved beyond believe....I think I can relate vo well with this one!!

Take care and Warm Hugs!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 30, 2006

An impassioned plea to be heard! Superb writing Rage! It's been a long time, since you've been here. If this is about you,I'm sure you know He hears the call of an honest heart! Hope you stay to share more of your splendid poetry!

Eileen^

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on January 30, 2006

A very powerful and excellently expressed poem, outstanding.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on January 30, 2006

To asassinate the endless night, you must suffocate it with the Light and Grace of God !
Darkness has no dominion when exposed to the Light !
Peter