Hello, Mrs. Smith..... (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2002

This is potent...a powerful poem! How emotional Mrs. Smith must've been to receive this phonecall! Thumbs-up!

Reviewed on September 1, 2002

Again I like your style of poetry. life certainly does throw us some curves.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on September 1, 2002

Linda.. (dont worry about the misplaced line)..this really got to me. We take so much for granted in life.. this moved at the sort of pace I would imagine a search would move.. more and more emotional as you get closer. By its end I was weeping. You wrote this so beautifully that I could feel the caller's emotions building until the end when it truly opened up. Powerful write! katy.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2002

Bill

Reviewed by TRASK

Reviewed on August 31, 2002

8-31-02

Some Of Us Are In This World For a Reason, Most Lost By Wayside, Dieing In Reluctant Pride___Ignorance In Their Forlorn Arrogance___

But, You as I, TRASK___ Do Abide By (God)...

TRASK

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on August 31, 2002

This is a wonderful poem, Linda. I'm sure many adopted children dream of finding lost parents in this manner. What I love about your stuff is how you slowly build up emotion. Then, at a certain point, it rushes out like rivers through a dam. Very special.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on August 31, 2002

Oh so very touching!!!
heartfelt

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2002

Well Linda, There you are crying for your mother you have known probably for years and miss her so much. A touching, sensitive poem.

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on August 31, 2002

Touching

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2002

Hello ... Wonderful ... Hey ... GOOD MOVE .. you did the right thing ... Thanks for submitting the comment to correct the line. This is really a wonderful imagination ..

Keep it up ... Superb .... :)...
keep smiling and take care (f)

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on August 31, 2002

This is a fantastic write. I enjoyed all the emotions that it brought out. Tim

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Very touching...loved this.

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Linda.. what a powerful write!

Reviewed by Justin Wolf (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Powerful piece. I thought what you had fit just fine, but you're right that line should be moved down. Bravo.

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

I've tried to correct the line Are you happy mother? The inside your lonely room should be one verse lower. This is not how I wrote it. I've resubmitted twice..and it's still this way...at least all the words are here..thats the main thing....Thanks for reviewing!!!!