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Shadow's Played
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
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Shadows played
Dancing softly in her room
In her little corner
She didn't see the darkness
Never thought about the gloom
She didn't feel
The terrible pain anymore
She sit quietly all alone
Curled in a ball on the floor

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Shadows played
As the fighting got worse downstairs
She wasn't afraid
Just wish she had someone who cares
She knew soon
Her Mommy would come to her door
Take her rage out on her
Like she has so many times before

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Shadows played
As she watched the curtain sway
If wishes came true
She'd wish her Mommy away
She heard her steps
As she slid closer to the wall
She heard the click of heels
Coming fast down the hall

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Shadows played
As a glow He came in the night
She felt somehow comforted
By the figure surrounded by light
He radiated such love
Her heart to young to understand
As the door burst open
Jesus reached out for her hand

~Linda Hill
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Authors Note:  Did Jesus come simply to comfort
or did He come to take her home?    You decide for yourself the ending.   I want to tell a story that REALLY happened in my hometown.  A family was browsing in a music store,  their little girl was on the other side of the store looking around.   A car ran through that side of the store.    The family was frightened knowing their child was standing at the worst impact,  but she was safe standing at the other end of the store!  She said Jesus had picked her up and moved her there.   What a joyous miracle that is!    I wanted to share that with you!  If His eye is on the sparrow...I know He watches me!
 



 


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 Reviews of "Shadow's Played"
Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on January 20, 2013
this was such an inspirational riveting write linda...pmedlin

Reviewed on July 1, 2012
Very nice, Linda. I like the "you decide for yourself" ending.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 31, 2011
Amazing true story in your author's notes, Linda. Your poem brought me back to my childhood. You always engage my mind and my heart. Keep writing.
Sheila

Reviewed by baz busbe
Reviewed on October 30, 2011
Wow that little girls testomony is amazing, and your poem is also amazing, really captures the little girls feelings, just glad Jesus was there with her, sometimes there is no one there for those little chlldren. Jesus please be with them. God bless. Baz

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
And he will continue to watch out for you my Dear Friend. Nice piece of writing.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by Janna Hill
Reviewed on October 13, 2011
A tragic riddle you put before us Linda.
Janna

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 13, 2011
We can't question the miracles of life and God, so many stories run thru my head that cofirm, YES they do happen~
Blesssings,
Christine

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 12, 2011
A phenomenal story following a gripping poetic reflection, Linda ~ full of reality, faith, peaceful knowing and miracles. Thank you!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on October 12, 2011
Awesome story Linda....so tragic to think so many children live with nightmares like this!! God bless children!

Anna

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on October 11, 2011
Mystery' Of (God) Far Greater Than One Will Ever Imagine--My Own Near Death (God) Shows No Remorse--You Have To Experience Death--If You Come Back Then You'll Know For Sure,i.e. Irrespective Compassion You Show Write Enough To Make Even Illiterate Think...

Plus: It Just Wasn't Her Nor My Time(s) To (Die) Go...

TRASK...

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 11, 2011
I'D LIKE TO THINK HE CAME TO TAKE HER HOME WITH HIM, BUT THEN AGAIN, DID HE DISSIPATE HER MOTHER'S MADNESS IN AN INSTANT? THERE'S A WHOLE LOT OF ROOM TO GO IN MANY DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS, IN ANY CASE...JESUS IS THE HERO, AS HE ALWAYS IS. AND THE TRUE STORY YOU SHARED IS ONE OF MANY I'VE HEARD OF GOD MIRACULOUSLY INTERVENING AND PREVENTING A TRAGEDY. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on October 11, 2011
A sad story but yet with a message of hope and relief through faith.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on October 11, 2011
Linda! Need I reply, we know the answer, to be sure.
Brilliance in the manner that you paint this scene.

btw like your new bio pic.


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