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Predator
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He's watching me
I know he's there
I feel him
He's near
I walk faster
He follows
Slithering behind me
As a snake
After its prey
Ready to attack
My fear intoxicating as
I smell his hunger
Suffocating me
Feel his breath
On the back of my neck
I inhale his venomous odor
As in one swift movement
He strikes

© Linda Hill 2003



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 Reviews of "Predator "
Reviewed by Billy Mitchell (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2003
Good use of description and symbolism. Very nice!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
Hi Linda, You show your great creative ability, with this terror piece.All is better now. Be well I am still here.

Loving You
Tony

Reviewed on April 15, 2003
Omagosh! This is one of my worst nightmares! I have goose bumps just reading this! ~Kerry

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
Probably the way a lot of women feel about walking alone at night or secluded places. It angers me that these men insist on making them feel that way.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
Linda, mysterious write, my friend. I just looked over my shoulder to make sure no one was there. Should never be alone after dark.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
Chilling.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
Caught me!! The art and the words... Felt the chill with this one.

Reviewed on April 15, 2003
yikes! scary stuff here! :0 (((HUGS))) well done, linda! :)

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
made the hair stand up on the back of my neck...

Reviewed by J. R. Corbin
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
scarey....
Jim :)

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
this was an awesome dark and chilling horror poem nice fantstic jobon this one my sweet angel friend

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
Linda,
These ones allways leaves chills
very good
peggy


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