This is not a "usual" Christmas write for me. Check out "I've Lost Christmas" from last year. I thought I would try something different. The format (rhyming acrostic) is very restrictive and thus will probably seem "forced." Best wishes to all.
Christmas (rhyming acrostic)
Christ is born in Bethlehem He comes in midst of mayhem Rejoice for he brings us peace Ignorance and hatred cease Sing his praises do not sway The Lord comes to show the way Make your enemy a friend All will be one in the end Shed your chains and walk away
Your rhyming acrostic is well placed in rhyme and rhythms Regis
and the messages are given from a sensitive & loving soul
you are like a peacekeeper-which by the way is a great Fleetwood Mac song...
Ignorance has many faces...but ultimately it is a lack of knowledge
we all should know better than to accompany it...ever...
we all are based on love through all creed and religion & beliefs
Thank You for always sharing your lovingness...
Praise the LORD both up and down.
Praise the LORD with both knees on the ground.
Praise the LORD for those you love.
Praise the LORD from up above.
Praise the LORD for He sent His Son.
Praise the LORD, He is the only one.
Praise the LORD, right from your heart.
Praise the LORD, and NEVER depart.
"Merry Christmas" to all.
"Merry Christmas" is right.
Shout it from the hills,
all day and all night!
"Merry Christmas" to all.
"Merry Christmas" we say!
"Merry Christmas" and rejoice,
because "Christmas" is Christ Birthday!
Made in the USA on Dec 11, 2008
by John Michael Domino
Reviewed by agung halim (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2008
Great! How do you like this?
MERRY CHRISTMAS in acrostics which you can Sing to the tune of "Hark the Herald Angels Sing" =
I love this poem. And you know at Christmas time people are more likely to be cheerful than any other time of the year. Some never make it out of the duldrums, but you can't have everything. Nothing is absolute. Excellent poem. Liz
Beautifully said and felt Sweet Reg!
Happy Holidays then and NOW!
This had a wonderful easy flow, no forceness than I could perceive! my friend
Much love and Warm hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeooxoo
STay Positive!
JESUS! Is the REASON for the SEASON! STarting with Thanksgiving!
"...Shed your chains and walk away" Amen!
This acrostic, smoothly and simply defines the reason for the season!
Nicely done Reg~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
This is beautiful and I did not notice force at all. My kind of poem. Good work!
Reviewed by S H (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2005
Beautiful thoughts that only a poem can express :)
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2004
Au Contraire, Regis, my friend... nothing a bit "forced" here, but rather a sincere and heart-touching sentiment. The poetry is lilting; the thoughts, divine. This is what it's all about. katy xox.
Divine writing for this special holiday. It doesn't have to be the usual writing because it is shared with us, so, that makes it "the one" we need. Regis, it comes from your soul, that's all that matters.
Thank you, Friend, for this meaningful Christmas present. Your words make up a rare gift to each of us - at the very right time! My most sincere wishes for you and yours for an absolutely grand celebration of Christmas and all its meaning. - Bill
Spot on, Regis, and, far from being "forced", you cut through all the sadly hackneyed "tinsel" focus that the Bethlehem scene tends to conjure up, and renew its truth and vigour with the "muscular" sentiments that you rightly attach to it. Bravo!! Not an easy thing to accomplish, but needless to say, you have done it in your inimitable style. You transcend the "ephemeria" of Christmas with the apocalyptic and prophetic last two lines: certainly gives us the right perspective! TY and PEACE truly be yours - now and always. LOL Kate xx
Regis, This would make the perfect Christmas card...A wreath of holly berries and pine, and this in the center....Gorgeous holiday write!
Merry Christmas Regis!
I see nothing "forced" herein, Regis, as you do such a cool job with these acrostic things...Ed
PS: seems I did ask and beg you and Kate to keep the damn Canadian Artic air up your way, but I see from the weather we are to get nailed on Monday morning down here...and here I thought we were friends...LOL! Ed (but not Rufuz, he loves the cold and snow)
There is nothing forced about your writing...ever. It flows from a full and sensitive heart. Thank you for reminding everyone what we are really supposed to be celebrating. Merry Christmas friend! Love to you, Michelle
Nice work, and it doesn't sound forced at all to me.
Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Simply stunning, as always. :)
Thanks for the comments; I always enjoy reading what you have to say. You make this site something hard to step away from.. :) Wonderful write; and wonderful bio quote as well... I enjoyed.
Happy Holidays,
~Kari Anne~
Regis thank you for sharing this, it is not forced, but felt from the heart, the yearning for peace that we all feel especially when celebrating remembrance of a savior called the Prince of Peace.
I always find acrostic rhyme amazing if it is cleverly constructed. Yours is perfect! What amazing talent you have Regis. The poem is one that I would love to print and keep with your permission. I'd like to print a copy for each of my family to remind them what Christmas is really about.
Blessings to you this Christmas season.
Love Chanti
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Regis You are Absolutely Awesome! I mean truly Talented and Awesone!
I love your 'stuff' This is so creative and so Everything about Christmas. Everything about Jesus. You are Great Regis Thank You!
Merriest of Christmas' and Many Blessed years.
God Bless You and all near and dear to you,
Yer secretagent, : )
Tracey
Throw a snoball for me and/or build a snoman fer me too. Merry Christmas!
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and the messages are given from a sensitive & loving soul
you are like a peacekeeper-which by the way is a great Fleetwood Mac song...
Ignorance has many faces...but ultimately it is a lack of knowledge
we all should know better than to accompany it...ever...
we all are based on love through all creed and religion & beliefs
Thank You for always sharing your lovingness...
Ensoulments Of Love
Vickie
it has been found difficult and left untried."
- G. K. Chesterton
!
Blessings and love,
Susan
Mark
Much Love,
Always!
Margaret
I like this poem, Christmas is by far my favorite holiday.
Nicole
Sheila
Blessings J'nia
Praise the LORD both up and down.
Praise the LORD with both knees on the ground.
Praise the LORD for those you love.
Praise the LORD from up above.
Praise the LORD for He sent His Son.
Praise the LORD, He is the only one.
Praise the LORD, right from your heart.
Praise the LORD, and NEVER depart.
"Merry Christmas" to all.
"Merry Christmas" is right.
Shout it from the hills,
all day and all night!
"Merry Christmas" to all.
"Merry Christmas" we say!
"Merry Christmas" and rejoice,
because "Christmas" is Christ Birthday!
Made in the USA on Dec 11, 2008
by John Michael Domino
MERRY CHRISTMAS in acrostics which you can Sing to the tune of "Hark the Herald Angels Sing" =
M ay God's love
E xpressed in Christ
R eached out to the whole nations
R eceive Him with joyful gladness
Y es! Emmanuel is here
C hrist the Lord in helpless babe
H as come to us as Saviour
R ejoice now
I n thanksgiving!
S in forgiven
T hrough Christ the Lamb!
M erry Christmas to
A ll wish
S ing praise, HALLELUJAH shout!
Jules
Bless YOu! Jasmin Horst
Happy Holidays then and NOW!
This had a wonderful easy flow, no forceness than I could perceive! my friend
Much love and Warm hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeooxoo
STay Positive!
JESUS! Is the REASON for the SEASON! STarting with Thanksgiving!
This acrostic, smoothly and simply defines the reason for the season!
Nicely done Reg~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
blessin's and inner peace to you Regis,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Wonderous writing!
Reindeer
Happy Holidays to you!
Gina
very creative
William .....Peace & Love
best
Ian
TRASK
N.
Superb acrostic - a beautiful Christmas rhyme my friend ... thanks for this exceptional one!!
Best wishes,
Robert
mon ami, merci--and jeaux noel!
the REAL reason for the Season--our Lord and Savior! thank you
((((HUGS)))), love and blessings, karla. :)
(Merry X-mas to you)
A warm beautiful Christmas wish goes your way from a sunny South Africa!!
Take care dear one!!
Warmest Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Joyeux Noel! Happy New Year! (I forgot how to say it in French! LOL)
PEACE To You
D
PS rhymes looked contrived (but that may be my fault)
And Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Merry Christmas Regis!
Lisa
PS: seems I did ask and beg you and Kate to keep the damn Canadian Artic air up your way, but I see from the weather we are to get nailed on Monday morning down here...and here I thought we were friends...LOL! Ed (but not Rufuz, he loves the cold and snow)
Wonderful thoughts Regis
Happy Holidays
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Thanks for the comments; I always enjoy reading what you have to say. You make this site something hard to step away from.. :) Wonderful write; and wonderful bio quote as well... I enjoyed.
Happy Holidays,
~Kari Anne~
Merry Christmas to you too.
May God's blessing be upon you and your family
We're blessed to have you on this site.
Love & Peace
Take care,
Sherry
ann
Blessings to you this Christmas season.
Love Chanti
I love your 'stuff' This is so creative and so Everything about Christmas. Everything about Jesus. You are Great Regis Thank You!
Merriest of Christmas' and Many Blessed years.
God Bless You and all near and dear to you,
Yer secretagent, : )
Tracey
Throw a snoball for me and/or build a snoman fer me too. Merry Christmas!