INTERESTING AND ENTICING. REPETITIVE LINES ARE NOT AT ALL BORING, BUT LEADS ONE FROM ONE LINE AND VERSE...TO ANOTHER...WITH ANTICIPATION. WELL WRITTEN AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS, LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Regis,
I think any lady would be very lucky to do all of the above with you except of course the dying part. In my book you are simply marvelous. Wow! you sure have a way with words.
Beaucoup d'amour,
Nicole
It's great to read your poem and feel the intense emotions and the frankness that comes across. Lucky lady who this is meant for. So as a "newbie" here; it's been fantastic to see the inner souls of men again and to see that they can be so similiar to us strange creatures such as we are. Thanks, Regis for sharing this intimate, heartfelt write. Love from Meredith
This write represents all aspects of life,love,and learning, either to grow together, or grow apart.
Which ever is the choice.
Masterfully written Regis, take a bow dear friend.
OMGosh it sizzles.
;)Ch'erie
A fine song, very catchy in terms of rhythm. Lovely.
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2005
Regis I love this and Yes I would to all of the above I think. Kinda sweating here though
OUTSATANDING and such a Happy smiling uplifting poem! I Love It!!!
Perfection Mon Ami!! Perfection!!! *****
Tracey 42 xoox(c :)
Awesome Reggi- I felt so warm reading this-- magical and mystical and a wanting to take place- Rightfully done- Into my Mr.Reggi Folder it goes- with many others : ) +Warmly and Sweetly,Sheee
STay Happy and STrOng!
Reviewed by Lori M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2005
Regis,
how great to read another write of yours!
Keep up the good work,my friend!
It came from the Heart of Poetry that formulated an Inevitable Utterance (I have been taught that there ARE such things) and just HAD to find a voice - and no wonder she chose yours', Regis. From a spirit of arrogance, this would have come across as hard and proud; but from the soft and sensual beauty of your loving and compassionate soul, this is melting, vulnerable and sincerely longing. It is also perfect in metre, rhythm and concept. It just HAD TO BE WRITTEN! Musical yet rock solid on the page. I love this! So glad you "gave in to it", like a true artist. TY and Bless you, Kate xx
Great. I liked it when I only read the last line of each stanza, when I only read the first two and when I read it all together as you posted it. ~ Sara
Regis I can feel the beat and hear the tune. I change the "would you" to "wouldya" tho. Now I know this rhyme is going to stay in my head! How about a chorus?
'Boy I think about you all of the time
You're the world going 'round in my mind
Time and tide may have taken its toll
But we can take this rock and make it roll'
No I Would Not Like To Die With You Or Anbody Else,i.e I Know Where I Go Before I Die--Very Few Human Beings Will Be There With Me_
But: If (God) Let's You See (Us) Me --You Will See Millions Little (Dead) Children Sticken Their Tongues Out Or Fingers Or Who Knows What They'll Do To You Humanity,i.e. Revenge ...
Very original, I like your style here Regis
wonderful one as always
The last stanza is simply amazing
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2005
Good stuff- the best part although we feel as though the people are just meeting, this could be about any couple at any stage in their relationship as they change and grow, and I think it is much easier for some to let go, rather than hold on to love through ups and downs, thick and thin, especially in our throwaway, grass is always greener society.
Sometimes Bro. Regis. . . the call of the rhyme just has to come out and be heard. Nothin' at all wrong with accepting 'walk-in muse'.
blessin's. . .
cynth'ya
p.s. This is really performance poetry that would make an audience smile and go "ahhh" inside.
This is interesting! It seems to me it is the female ego that has just met her alter ego. It says to me "sub-personality." We all need to meet our real selves. Nice duality prose, Regis!
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I think any lady would be very lucky to do all of the above with you except of course the dying part. In my book you are simply marvelous. Wow! you sure have a way with words.
Beaucoup d'amour,
Nicole
Great image and the write is absolutely perfect!!
Best regards,
Lance
Janet
Each poem builds upon the last way, in celebration!
Becca
Micke
Which ever is the choice.
Masterfully written Regis, take a bow dear friend.
OMGosh it sizzles.
;)Ch'erie
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Simply magnifique! Very well done; take a bow, mon ami!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, ton ami, Karen Lynn de la Texas. :D
:)Sandy
OUTSATANDING and such a Happy smiling uplifting poem! I Love It!!!
Perfection Mon Ami!! Perfection!!! *****
Tracey 42 xoox(c :)
STay Happy and STrOng!
how great to read another write of yours!
Keep up the good work,my friend!
much enjoyed this read, regis.
peace,
carolyn
God bless,
Sandie.
Love, Janny xoxoxo
No matter where it came from it is very uplifting and whimsical!!
'Boy I think about you all of the time
You're the world going 'round in my mind
Time and tide may have taken its toll
But we can take this rock and make it roll'
But: If (God) Let's You See (Us) Me --You Will See Millions Little (Dead) Children Sticken Their Tongues Out Or Fingers Or Who Knows What They'll Do To You Humanity,i.e. Revenge ...
Different N Unique Write!
TRASK
peace and love, Carole
Ron
You must have the ladies queueing..
Take care,
Sherry
Don't worry where it came from, enjoy the moment and take a bow! You've penned a hypnotic, wonderful write...and yes, I would. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Felix
wonderful one as always
The last stanza is simply amazing
Carmen :-)
I would.....wink....yip!!
Love TinkaS
blessin's. . .
cynth'ya
p.s. This is really performance poetry that would make an audience smile and go "ahhh" inside.
Sage
Peace,
Eileen