When I first met you I threw all prudence to the wind And what a wind it was Wild yet winsome Like a welcome whirlwind You held the reins You rode the wind Like it was your steed What is it with girls and horses? In awe I now merely watch you ride I hope you won’t fall off your lofty mount For some reason I’m thinking Brokeback Mountain But should you fall I want to be there to catch you That's what true friends do
WHAT EVER ELSE MIGHT HAVE TRANSPIRED...SOMETHING MOST BEAUTIFUL HAS HAPPENED; A FRIENDSHIP...THE PERFECT BASIC FOR 'ANYTHING' TO HAPPEN. A MOST ENJOYABLE READ. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSING. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Interesting right Reg and striking in it's images of horses racing across a plain, but the deeper message of freindship shines throught in the end like a sun breaking through the clouds.
What a ride!!:) Love the way the ways you made us feel and hear wind: ala wind, winsome, whirlwind...vowel echoes in words such as
thinking and friends. Kept Love in the saddle without once getting on your high horse. {Thought doesn't really fit, but it rode up & I couldn't resist climbin' on.} Love horses, love the writin', cain' say as how I can resist the cowboy waitin' t'grab the reins. He is so passionate and talented! 'Pea' <3
Yes, that's what true friends do but so few are true. :-) I suspect you make a wonderful friend in person, Regis. Enjoyed this poem. Sweet use of alliteration. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Jewel Sample (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Wonderful painting of words to depict the freedom of true friendship. A friend in need is a friend indeed!
Blessings to you,
Jewel Sample, "Flying Hugs and Kisses" author
You can cinch my saddle for me anytime, Reg. I didn't fall...that line "what is it with girls and horses"...my poem Wildhorses will tell you...I love you...
What a good friend you are!!!!!! Yes, a friend in need is a friend indeed; especially when there romance within the friendship which makes the friendship all the more treasurable.
This one is very cleverly written as it can be interpreted in a variety of ways.
Yet, isn't that what poetry is about, anyway? Words flowing from the soul and expressed.
On the surface, this one is intense
On the other hand, this is a great metaphor for deep seated emotions we all have within, and sometimes, something or someone stirs like a beautiful Horse !!
Outstanding piece!!Love And Peace to you Always..Morning Star
This is an up-for-it write from you, Regis, with a wild and exhilarated feel to it. And in a register quite unlike your usual one, it seems to me... just shows what a Wild Cat Wind can do! Quite a tease, too, with the mystery dedication and Brokeback reference. Quite makes me want to slap my thigh. Go you, Regis... and her! What is it with girls and horses? You just ask the horse! :)) LOL K xx
Interesting write. Sometimes it is hard to be friends when we have been or want to be so much more...but sometimes we just need to be. This is a wonderful expression of complications.
All good things to you, Regis,
Jim
That first rush does, often, dilute our prudence, I will assuredly attest to that little fact. True friends are few in this crazy world. I am sure though that you break all molds with your suave and endearing charms dear Regis. A delightful write friend.
"Wind Rider" was a lovely title for your picturesque poem. She must sail along freely with the wind in her hair, knowing there is someone to pick her up if she falls.
hmmmm...this reminds me of someone...and what else can we do but be there for someone...it is when they need us that we truly show our worth...enjoyed the read...Peace Abel
Reviewed by N RK (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2007
Reg,
Time and again you delight. Your kudos deserved, well earned. I love the imagery in this poem. Its awesome!
Nicki
good read...as you know, you switch tenses at "I watch..." you might try "In awe I now merely watch you ride..." [when you threw prudence to the wind, more than watching is implied, therefore the now and merely. hope this makes sense. still it's clear about the continued admiration, etc. thanks for sharing
I would like to have that hot young lady ride into my stall so I can be her stud...;) Ed
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
It is so good to read you again-i loved this, but I found the sentences in the brackets distracting and like the poem better with them omitted, because then this is so good, it could be submitted somewhere-keep up the good work, Regis! :)
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Gentle words of admiration, plus an appreciation for a special friendship. A meaningful poem with great imagery! Hugs:)
Sheila
Steve
Fee
A friend will catch you when you fall!
and...When you fall short of their expectations too!
This write flowwwwwwwed like the wind!
Her memories live on! in your heart I hear it strongly!
WArmest Blessings and HuGs,WArrior Sheee
thinking and friends. Kept Love in the saddle without once getting on your high horse. {Thought doesn't really fit, but it rode up & I couldn't resist climbin' on.} Love horses, love the writin', cain' say as how I can resist the cowboy waitin' t'grab the reins. He is so passionate and talented! 'Pea' <3
you were born to write and i am ceratin many more beautiful things
, but this is among them!
be blessed!
Rich Criso
Blessings to you,
Jewel Sample, "Flying Hugs and Kisses" author
Best wishes always to you and yours
from
kay
... choice of words really help to create the sense of wind and in general spirited motion ....
..enjoyed
..jeanne
Stirring.
Ron
Myrna
Sage
What is it with girls and horses?
I love that line and the comparison that you made between the both.
Love the imagery you have shared here.
~hugs~
Karen
Chrissy
And "Passion" is her name ...
Always a pleasure to read you, Regis.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Aberjhani
Thank you,
Love, Sheila
A most intriguing question, Regis.
Rose
Sandie May Angel :o)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
I guess girls like it between there legs..the horse of course..
Yet, isn't that what poetry is about, anyway? Words flowing from the soul and expressed.
On the surface, this one is intense
On the other hand, this is a great metaphor for deep seated emotions we all have within, and sometimes, something or someone stirs like a beautiful Horse !!
Outstanding piece!!Love And Peace to you Always..Morning Star
free this felt free
thanks for sharing....
Sam
Take care,
Sherry
Best regards,
Leland
All good things to you, Regis,
Jim
Blessings to you ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Lena
Light & peace,
Joselyn
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
A StormSpinner kinda write! Lofty; adventurous; yet compassionate, wanting to be there when your friend falls. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Rebecca
Love TinkaSweets
Peace. Joyce
Love,
CJ
Time and again you delight. Your kudos deserved, well earned. I love the imagery in this poem. Its awesome!
Nicki
GIDDY-UP ELVIRA!
Good one.
Some hidden meaning there?
Elizabeth
Carmen
Love,
Susan