I do not believe that anyone can do anything about with whom they fall in love or who falls in love with them...
It’s Not My Fault
It can’t be helped
You don’t know
Where the asteroid will strike
Where the hurricane will land
Where the tornado will touch
When the earth will tremble
When the avalanche will awaken
When the volcano will rouse
Where the rainbow will be born
Where rain will bless the thirsty land
Where the snow will soothe my soul
When I fell in love with you
It can’t be helped.
LOVE...THAT WILD, DOMINATING EMOTION THAT MAKES ONE, THAT IS CAUGHT IN ITS GRIPS, FEEL UTTERLY 'HELPLESS'. DONE VERY WELL...I ENJOYED THIS WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING REGIS, GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATION
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2009
Yes, all forces of nature over which we have no control. Great parallels drawn between the elements of nature and those of the heart. Well done.
How beautifully right you are, Reg! Whether it's the chemistry mixture that is just right, or cupid's arrow hitting it's mark, once overwhelming love hits us, there is no turning back...and that's a wonderful event in our lives! Kudos to you, friend, for this poetic explanation of love...
Blessings and Appreciation - Micke
This poem is screaming to keep going. The last two lines seem abrupt and do not close the poem. The title does not do this poem justice. The point I get from the poem is that love is comparable to nature. Nature can be random and elements can erupt or move at anytime. It is uncontrollable. With telling what is unknown, the closing needs to something that is known. An expression of how natural the love is and how uncontrolled the speaker is.
The perfections of this meaningful write embrace me
Your words are the power of love expressed just like you described
Very Beautiful Write Regis...
The Heart Loves Who It Wants To
Much Love Always
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Does the expression SLAM-DUNK mean anything to you? How 'bout WOW--?
I was already wowed by that big rollicking smile on your bio page.
Dynamite combo!! Always admiring, always respecting, always filled with gratitude and affection for Sir Reg, Empress o'Pod
Regis...such a realistic write my friend... I admire your free flowing verses no matter in which subject you write because you write with a class and you have your own style...keep them coming...love n luck...BHUWAN
Very much true Regis
You have written what one feels
when love has claimed your heart
I’m very happy for you!!
Beautifully writing and expressed thoughts
Peace Love and Light….and hugsss too…..Morning Star
This is so true, Regis! You have a wonderful gift for using nature to express emotions. Strong examples here parallel the mystery of love. Love and Hugs~
Sheila
Excellent, Regis, not enough written these days about the mystery of love that finds us just as the storms seek us out. Most stuff seems to concentrate on one-night stands as though any old discovery that we seek out will do just fine. Thanks for putting the element of love back in love....Jerry
It is a cosmic awareness when this feeling hits us, It's the Universe guiding you my friend, so just go with the flow and see where you end up. Power of positive thinking and choosing to be happy and joyful.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
This is beautiful Reg. Soothing - Loving and a Loyal calling!
Love this heartfelt write! and it's true, sad to me at the moment, my sister is in love with my EX of 19yrs. Her Nieces Uncle! It's going on a month and I'm hoping for a change! and realization into FAMILY! Their are more fish in the sea, if you allow yourself to be, I told her! My feelings for her are not strong!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSSion Lady Shexooo
WOW. If you didn't catch that, let me say it again...WOW. And you are 100 percent correct. We can't help who we love...life would be easier if we could. But I think that if we had that ability, much of the sweetness and flavor that we expect from life would be lost...so it's not a design flaw by any means. Incredible piece. You just get better and better my friend. Love you, Michelle
True...I have heard it said that we have no control over who our relatives are or who we fall in love with. This is a sweet poem, Reg, and the image you chose is wonderful.
Take care,
Sherry
The question is: Does life lead us to where it wants us to be, or where we want it to be? Your poem states a fact, we don't know so many things that can, will, or could effect our lives. A thoughtful write.
Not crappy, Regis, this is beautifully wise - and cleverly illustrated. One never knows when lightning will strike - and it seems to have, you - well done.
This is beautiful, so stop calling it crappy!! It is so true, too, and you've expressed a feeling here that we can all relate to-and you wrote it really well-I like the comparisons you used, they were unique. Blessings, Michelle
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATION
You are absolutely right.
Nicole
Blessings and Appreciation - Micke
xo Taylor
Love TinkaSweets
Your words are the power of love expressed just like you described
Very Beautiful Write Regis...
The Heart Loves Who It Wants To
Much Love Always
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
You made me think. And laugh.
Thank you.
Tony
And the poem is a winner too.
Georg
I love the new photo of you. The poem is a rapture of the bounty of earth and love...the picture captured the mood...Lovely...
Together they create a beautiful picture!
Cryssa
It's gorgeous, beautiful Regis!!
Love has no care for when and where it grows... just as long as it does!
Love, Suzie :-D
I was already wowed by that big rollicking smile on your bio page.
Dynamite combo!! Always admiring, always respecting, always filled with gratitude and affection for Sir Reg, Empress o'Pod
Sandie Angel :o)
Gina
You have written what one feels
when love has claimed your heart
I’m very happy for you!!
Beautifully writing and expressed thoughts
Peace Love and Light….and hugsss too…..Morning Star
Newfie hugs, Rose
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Sheila
Bobbi
Best regards,
Leland
an enjoyable read of thoughts...
Art Sun....
very beautifully in this piece of work.
Harold M. Nash
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Love this heartfelt write! and it's true, sad to me at the moment, my sister is in love with my EX of 19yrs. Her Nieces Uncle! It's going on a month and I'm hoping for a change! and realization into FAMILY! Their are more fish in the sea, if you allow yourself to be, I told her! My feelings for her are not strong!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSSion Lady Shexooo
STay Positive!
we can't help who we fall in love with.
Take care, Pierre
best of all things,
Jim
Myrna
This is so touching. Falling in love is something that just happens, its not planned. Love your description.
Much Love,
Mary
Stay blessed,
Myrtle Poor
Cheers,
Dan
Take care,
Sherry
(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
John
Love,Christine
Love,
ET
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.