After we talked
And you chose
We cannot be together
I went from certain heaven
To possible hell
I wandered about
I met a genuine damsel
Girl with ebon hair
And purple shining
Eyes gleaming darkly
Black pearls
Beyond beauty
Looking at her
I could barely breathe
Her everlasting entity
Grabbed me by the soul
Beautiful black hole
Endless depth
Bottomless ecstacy
Thinking of you
I wondered
About certain heaven
And possible hell
How close I walk to the edge
I was sad for you
Not for me
I am beyond sadness
Because I love
And hurt like hell
I've many of your poems to read yet, but am determined. Each time I read a poem of yours, I get something out of it that keeps me wanting to read more.
Certainly a heartfelt poem from an emotional poet and writer. Well done my friend. You never disappoint with your words for they speak to us in volumes... and move us in many ways...
Interesting! profound and heartfelt! Yet God is a Healer, and He is a Keeper I can relate to this Regis. Powerful write thank you for sharing please do not stop caring! May the Lord strengthen you!
Much Love,
Always!!!
Margaret
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
Tremendously powerful and beautiful poem Regis. I can feel the emotion in every word, every line. Walking on the edge. I know this well. I wrote a poem called "Sleeping Tide" which touches on some of these themes, like life on the edge. We keep doing this Regis. Must be something in the poetic heart.
This I can so relate to ... Sounds like you didnt miss heaven by much either. This was so thought provoke'n written. You have a way of taking your reader right along your path. Enjoyed very much
Thank you so much for your more than kind comments
you have left behind...
Hugs
Donna
Reviewed by Mystic Rayne (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2009
I loved the imagery you used in this - beautifully done
The pain of lost love can be healed with the touch of new love...
wandered about
I met a genuine damsel
Girl with ebon hair
And purple shining
Eyes gleaming darkly
Black pearls
Beyond beauty
Looking at her
I could barely breathe
Her everlasting entity
Maybe even in love, when one door closes another one opens. We just need to be ready to walk through it when it does...
Achingly painful, you paint a portrait of heartache that I have known. The unraveling of the heartstrings can be painful, but ultimately, it becomes liberating.
Take care,
Sherry
Boy of all the AD poets I've read you really capture the "perils" of love, its expectations, its unrequited possibilities, its bottomless joys and soaring griefs. Your style is so suited to it... Hey, read your new bio, who's the "new" lovely lady on your arm? Wonderful! And where can I find out more about "Autumn Leaves" (?) is it a book, ezine or journal?
Next time, michael
Deep painful emotions throughout these lines
Love is kind, sweet but
When they breaks your heart
Love truly hurts
Regis give your heart time to heal
And take care
I agree with Romantic Poetess she is
She is a Sultrily beauty
Sending you Peace Love and Light and Hugsss..Yolie
Reviewed by Pamela garner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2009
love can be like a double edge sword. one one side it is sweet& beautiful and the other it is painful &hurtful. thanks for sharing. peace &love Pamela
love, sometimes it requires the tenacity of an English bulldog -- blended with the tenderness of a silken touch -- this is an emotionally rich poem Reg -- you have made it so easy for us to relate to the ecstasy and agony of such moments -- an excellent piece of art my dear friend -- much peace and love to you -- JMW
WEll, this sure ain't funny!
A great poem, with a sad message my sweet kind friend!
My heart hurts for your pain, but don't let it WIN!
Your stronger than this my sweet friend! Great picture to express these tough emotions!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExoooo
Your Words of Emotions Are Inspiring Regis
those temptations we crave of love’s touch
oh….the invigorating sweet erotic quest
steadfast we dance like sensual passions
gleaming upon the concurs of euphoric unity
yet charted only by the goddess of decisions…
From the gracile flights of our desires yearning
we fall from the sky when our wings are removed
the descent is indeed a torrent pain
regressing within our hearts….
Much Love & Inspirations Regis
This Woman Is Sultrily Gorgeous!!!
Vickie {{hugzzz}}
Emotional garbage to be taken out in a 39-gallon lawn and garden black bag and mourned...Don't let the beauty of the spring flowers be trampled by these dark emotions, Reg...mulch and recycle beauty...sweets to you...
What is wrong with the woman?? Judgement's po', fo' sho'~!
Couldn'a been Ms. Right, but. . .she's right around the corner, you'll see! Love your honesty and passion. Illustration you chose is perfect!! Luv ya! Phyllis
I'm also concur with Felix...a little mixed as to who this is dirrected but i felt ..the pain, the pain,that was decisive and a feeling I wish on no one,
stan
You have such a beautiful, loving, giving heart to be in such a state as you so painfully express. May the light of love shine brightly and bring you everylasting peace....
Your emotions are showing so much in this poem. I feel for you. I have been through some rejection in the past. Never happy about it, but it does happen to us. Just keep your hopes up and know it isn't about you and don't put yourself down. Things sometimes are not meant to be and you are better off by yourself.
I am with Felix on this, I am not sure who this is about, but it does sound very intense and honest, and sad that still you hurt like this. Blessings, and less pain I pray for you, my friend. Michelle
Interesting feelings herein are present, pain and love seem to be an everyday combination, why can it not be different, but that is, I suppose, the way of life...e
The Bear Paw could have it right, Regis, that this sounds like being on the rebound, but I have to hand it to you, you know where to rebound to. And, your poem certainly catches the mix of love, attraction and hell. Pain and pleasure, so closely related we've heard it said, but you've said it more well than it is usually done......Jerry
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Much Love,
Always!!!
Margaret
You must have fallen for the girl hard lol.
Acirč C
I look forward to reading your poems. This one is to the point! You have done it again. Good use of words.
Regards,
Nicole
Thank you so much for your more than kind comments
you have left behind...
Hugs
Donna
cheers
milton
Regis beautiful and sad all in one.
Such an emotionally packed "After We Talked"
If love is meant love will be.
Continued blessings to you and your wonderful works,
Gwendolyn
wandered about
I met a genuine damsel
Girl with ebon hair
And purple shining
Eyes gleaming darkly
Black pearls
Beyond beauty
Looking at her
I could barely breathe
Her everlasting entity
Maybe even in love, when one door closes another one opens. We just need to be ready to walk through it when it does...
Well done as always...
Take care,
Sherry
Next time, michael
Love is kind, sweet but
When they breaks your heart
Love truly hurts
Regis give your heart time to heal
And take care
I agree with Romantic Poetess she is
She is a Sultrily beauty
Sending you Peace Love and Light and Hugsss..Yolie
What a beautiful expression of love. Your girl is lovely Regis.
Mariann
Ron
I can feel the depth of these emotions. Love can impale in more than one way. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
A great poem, with a sad message my sweet kind friend!
My heart hurts for your pain, but don't let it WIN!
Your stronger than this my sweet friend! Great picture to express these tough emotions!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExoooo
A great sense of disappointment and sadness in this write.
Sandie Angel :(
those temptations we crave of love’s touch
oh….the invigorating sweet erotic quest
steadfast we dance like sensual passions
gleaming upon the concurs of euphoric unity
yet charted only by the goddess of decisions…
From the gracile flights of our desires yearning
we fall from the sky when our wings are removed
the descent is indeed a torrent pain
regressing within our hearts….
Much Love & Inspirations Regis
This Woman Is Sultrily Gorgeous!!!
Vickie {{hugzzz}}
Cryssa
Love,
Christine
Peace be with you
William
Love is torture at times -even in the best relationships. I wish I could erase the pain-touching poem-I can feel your emotion. Sheri
Edwin
Love,
Sage
Couldn'a been Ms. Right, but. . .she's right around the corner, you'll see! Love your honesty and passion. Illustration you chose is perfect!! Luv ya! Phyllis
Love,
Becca~
Carole~
hugs
Kathie
stan
(((( Regis )))
I hope soon the sun will shine for you once again.
Blessings,
~Linda
Newfie hugs, Rose
Sincerely,
Regino
TRASK
Be always safe,
Karen
a poem that quivers with emotion
intensely written! Hope you find comfort soon...
Love,
Eileen
Myrna
Fee
Much pain in these lines ... I'm sorry.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
A bottle of 25 years old Chivas Regal is recommended.
Georg
Great to read you again,
Ron
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;(
A real downer my friend - I know the feeling all too well . . . a great penning!!
Blessings,
Lance
"If you can't be with the one you love"...
*Glen*
In Spirit,
Bear