Wishing upon you a neat love like this, when you find it, I hope to be let known, so I can congratulate you!

Regis,
This is wonderful! The message is clear and convincing.
To your continued success/

Barbara Henry

Your similes bring smiles, and bursts of appreciation. Well done. I think I like my love "neat" also, Regis.

One of your best Regis, I love every line of it. I am saving this one in my library. Here are my favorite lines

"Neat like a seamless sari
Soft and silky smooth
On bare skin"

Just simply beautiful....

What a "neat" way to describe
love. I like the poem! You are
a neat person!
Beckers

Enjoyed reading this one too!

I think you should write a rhyming poem for once. I don't prefer this.

You can be windy as in blowing up a balloon or simply get a tire pump, but the only way you're ever gonna get love "neat" is with one of those blow-up girlie dolls. Hell, Reg, be honest: You can't always be "neat" even with yourself!

And if you've found the secret, then join me in a trip to the library where we'll erase the millions of references that remind us time and again, "If this were a perfect world..."

Now, to be fair, in "Neat" you never said you were gonna get or ever had love that was "neat." You merely said what you liked and what you wanted. So, in that regard, you've spoken for nearly all of us.

We do so love our fantasies. And we can always count on you to give us a great write.

(By the way, the beautiful doll in your photo is really neat.)

Richard

NEAT LOVE IS AN OXYMORON. (AND YOU KNOW IT.) See Peter. julie

I can dig it my friend Reg.........I admire the clever, yet deep and poignant words you flow........I always have......Thank you for sharing the journey with me my artistic..... kindred soul brother......

Peace,
Bill :-)

Clever write, Reg ... love can sometimes be as cold as ice and shaken not stirred ;) ... I prefer mine without the ice as well. Enjoyed! ~Hugs, Elizabeth ("full golden fall moon"...I like that)

I like this poem. Describing how love can be.

"Neat" flows and glows neatly.

In appreciation,

Dixie Dawn Michelle

AEWE! THIS IS DIFFERENT Reg.
I like it!
I understand that neat and dry feelings!Till.....

WRITE ON!
Blessings, Peace and WARM Hugs, Purple_Passions, SHEExooo

Awesome you like your love Neat
Which is Simple effective and elegant
Well I think this poem is beautiful and cool
To be in love is neat
Wishing you Peace Love and Light…Yolie

I like the analogy, Regis. :~)
Cryssa

Hi dear Regis
You have a heart as clean and smooth as the surface of a golden mirror. A neatly crafted love poem

Hi Regis, quite a little gem you've written here, love Holly

This is nice, sweet, and flowing with beautiful imagery. Great to read you after a long hiatus.

Debs

If only such love really existed though. Maybe it does for some. This is a wonderful poem, straight forward and no holds barred telling it like it should be. Thanks Reg for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.

and also my dear sweet Regis...Besides "Neat"-
You Like Your Love With Passions' Heat :)
Much Love & Blessings Always For Love's Bounty in Your Heart
Vickie

WELL WRITTEN...CUTE...WITH GOOD PHRASES AND IMAGERY. BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

<3 H e a r t - m e l t i n g !! <3

Very nice.

I bet your love nest is really NEAT , tucked away in the Canadian mountains!...M

Yup the only way to HAVE it IS neat!! Down the love hatch!! mmmmmm..very refreshing ..

Well done Regis..splendid work..:)))

Vesna

Very nice twist!!! ;)

Janet xx

Very nicely put Regis. Neat

neat romantic verse Reg, they start out neat then end up like my wife and I, heavier, old and hanging in there, cheers

a nice twist to this cock-tail/tale :)

Far out baby. Great stuff Regis. Wish it could always be neat; but like ice cubes, bound to melt in the "heat" and end up a mess.

That is Neat to the nth degree!
Susan

ohhhhhhh yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah... very crystal and 100% proof and pure, but oh so smooth and warming with it... funny how spirits can do that to you... be cool to the tip of the tongue yet warming to the heart. Gettin the full flavour of this one, Regis! Sounds like a recipe to avoid love-on-the-rocks to me! :)) xx

Regis, very cool(60's parlance) and neat, not cold -- as Eileen said, a little erotic too -- but as Ron states, I too will definitely pass -- you always pen a great poem -- this is proof positive -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Sweet is all that can be said nothing more

I think I'll pass. ;-)

Ron

Neat poem, though.

Only the best can be neat... any other requires a little ice. Very nice.

Very nice Regis. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel

Regis,
Great write1
Nicole

neatly written, Regis ...

A great poem Regis, neat in every way. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Patrick beat me to the words...my thoughts :o) Great expressions, Reg...and cleverly written!!
Blessings and Love...neat - Micke

Neat and sweet and undiluted

That's quite a combo. Great work Regis. Patrick

What a way to put it.. I love it!

Myrna

neat love with neat feelings....good write Regis. Best Wishes. Neerja

It is all very nea to me.

Cheers,
Dan

Very beautiful sentiments Regis and not unaccepetable to ask for at all but seldom attained.

Wish this was possible, Regis. Unfortunately, love hurts at times if it's genuine. For me, this poem captures the good intentions we all have going into a relationship. It also carries the hope to not be hurt. I love the imagery in this poem - the smooth lines, like a soft caress. Excellent writing. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

...the heat is neat....such warmth to your tender poem..I agree..hold the cold :)

Very NEAT! I love this passionate poem. Nicely done Reg.
Peace, love, and light,

Amber "V"

Neat poem from a romantic heart.

Oh my...so sweet ... just like you dear man...sighhh....keep smiling OK..Hugss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo

WOW, Regis! There are many thoughts that pop into my head as I read your highly interesting poem because it brings a new perception to my thinking. I never thought of love or ("love making") as being so focused that one could eliminate all the little quirks (and "daggers") that slip in and out of one's consciousness that is frequently provoked by another in any relationship. Your poem seems to aim at perfection that transcends the human aptitude of imperfection. But what an excellent write--that stirs so much thought inside a reader.

Well, what can I say?...inebriating! ! !

Georg

Passionate, sweet....romantic

Neatly written, Regis.

How absolutely sweet and authentic in emotion this is. It has a subtleness to it that is so relaxing...

Be always safe,
Karen

Very passionate write. Just when you thought it was safe....I'm back :-)

Love is never neat though is it, It's always messy. This is one of the things I find saddest about our existence.But I never give up hope.

Interesting write

Take Care,
Pierre

Nice one, Reg; I like it! Very much! Yes! Well done, mon ami, c'est magnifique!

(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

You communicate your desires very well, Regis, well done. I'd rather not have the ice cubes, either - unless they're in a glass my loved one brings to me. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

I love to color outside of the lines and that is how I like my love. Always an exciting surprise; creative and new. This was a fun read, Reg, open and unabashed.
Take care,
Sherry

I love this, Reg.

Neat and sweet and undiluted.

Keep it coming. -gene.

I love this "hold the ice" well said. LadyJ

You like your love neat
I like mine sweet
like a strawberry treat
dipped in honey with a taste of wine
we`re all so unique
don`t you find

With Love Tammy

Wow! Can't mistake how you like your love, and your offer is also forthright Still this has a sense of eroticism that is quite seductive, Reg!;-)

Pretty NEAT.
Very unique.

Doug