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Brush Strokes in D Minor
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The water shuttered
as I threw a rock in the pond;
the wake pushing out
stirring the life beneath the surface.

Walking amidst the sorrows of the Holy Land…

These camouflage fatigues are heavy
like the heat bearing down on this desert.

Holding my breath I pulled my rifle up slowly
glaring through the infrared;
impressions stalking the twilight
in the summer of resolve.

Sending a rock into the pond
I watched him fall
slowly to the bottom;
pushing out the sand that lay in his path.

Continuing my escape into the life behind me,
underneath soft brush strokes of percussion….

In the kitchen, she’s cooking dinner.
The girls are chasing a dog’s wagging tail
running and screaming in delight;
at the near chance of catching it.

The sounds of jazz adhering to every crack
and crevice of that old house.

Father I call on you …

Send me home
far away from this.

Where the peace of this world
is stirring;
the peace I represent
that throws so many rocks.


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 Reviews of "Brush Strokes in D Minor"
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2002
Again you have touched me deeply, only those who live this, at war or at home can fully appreciate the message.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 24, 2002
excellent poem... peace is an illusion...

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on August 24, 2002
Excellent imagery, Tim.. really touching piece...
Jenni

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 24, 2002
8-24-02

___All Is Not What It appears To Be 0n The Surface...

TRASK

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on August 24, 2002
You are a very talented writer. The pieces I have read of yours, are all beautiful, each one in its own right! This is deep and soul touching.
Thank you for posting it!

Maria

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2002
Tim;
You have truly captured the longing to be home.... that so many soldiers must have ( and still do) feel. Excellently done. In war, does anyone really win?

Reviewed by Lady Peg
Reviewed on August 24, 2002
Tim,
wonderful versed images.. and that picture.
excellent write..
Peg

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on August 24, 2002
Beautiful imagery...and the
pic is magnificent! Loved
this write Tim!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2002
This touches a chord in my heart...
Indeed the imagery is vivid and the
expression, moving...

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2002
Excellent vivid images.


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