A stone's throw from our back door
were all the worlds we would explore.
Through the Virginia countryside
were all the kings and armored guards.
We fought and conquered every one
until the sunset brought us home.
In our beds all tucked away
we whispered ‘til she came
to read to us of knights and kings
by the open flame.
It seemed like only yesterday
when all these fears were gone away.
Now the sky is black with smoke
the sun blocked overhead.
My brother fell in her Bloody Lane
now I am alone.
I buried him by the dusty moonlight
more than a hundred miles from home.
I lay in my heart a prayer for our mother
who will turn from the truth when this day is done.
The lives and laughter of her two sons are gone,
leaving only memories and dreams to haunt her.
A creaking saddle in a field of haze
came to shake the early day.
The air is filled with the cries of men,
who lie in their final resting beds.
One last charge is all that’s left
for this failing Southern son.
To this grave in fields of blue
I take my honor and my pride
The Lords sweet grace and his eternal freedom
will be given to me in the rising sun
a stone's throw away in battle at Antietam.
I live only 15 miles from the Antietam National Battlefield. On September 13, 2002 we will celebrate the 140th commemorative reenactment of the Battle of Antietam. Over 23,000 people died there. It was the bloodiest battle during the Civil War.
September 13 .. thank you for taking me back to history .. The day next to this is Sep 14 .. which we all cant forget ... its too history .. but tooo recent ....
Im having huge waves of goosebumps washing over me at this moment.. sometimes even our own history never gets any closer than a page in a book.. you have set it down in front of me and Im finally looking at it.. beautifully done.. written like a "slice of life", youve given it power and pathos. well done, Tim. katy.
Tim,
Bless you for sharing the commemoration.
I believe in the continuum of being expressions like this serve to heal yesterday for the benefit of todays choices.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2002
What wonderful poetry about an awful tragedy. I've been there, it chills the senses to think of such suffering and carnage. You capture the pain so well.
Afrika
Bless you for sharing the commemoration.
I believe in the continuum of being expressions like this serve to heal yesterday for the benefit of todays choices.
Jen
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