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Adventures in commuting
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The vortex rotated slowly Dark and churning Boiling like an evil stew Descending ever downward As if pointing directions Straight to the devil’s lair Thousands of lives caught In the swirling black chaos Dancing like a plague of raging locusts Debris spatters off the windshield I curse the day Stuck once again Smothering in the fumes Behind a greyhound bus Copyright 2009 Patrick A Granfors

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

I truly feel sorry for those who have to commute every day to and from work. I know some people who spend three hours of their day at it. You have conveyed the theme very effectively here via your verses, Patrick. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on August 23, 2009

Expressive visions of inferno!
It's out there, in the street.

Axilea

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 23, 2009

LOL! Good one, Patrick! And here I thought you were writing about Storm. Wasn't the black clouds I was thinking of - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 23, 2009

Those fumes are deadly, indeed!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

Love your creativity. I hate the smell of diesel.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

You had me for a second there; thought you were writing about a tornado; nope! Greyhound bus! LOL Too funny; well done, Patrick; loved it!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

I IMAGINE THAT THE VIRTUE OF 'PATIENCE' MUST BE CALLED UPON GREATLY IN A SITUATION LIKE THIS, WHICH YOU HAVE DEPICTED SO VIVIDLY WITH GOOD IMAGERY. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

At least it wasn't a school bus that stops every 60 feet
Have a great one
The Buzzard

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