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Crusin' Boozin' & Losin'...all for a good cause
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Thoughts upon disembarking the Norwegian Pearl, our adventure hostess.


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Norwegian Pearl, gorgeous girl

Thought we’d give cruise a whirl

A week aboard to just unwind

 The constant crushing daily grind

 

Soft scent sea air like magic flowers

An ocean bouquet of healing powers

The gentle sway, relaxing pace

Put a smile back on my face

 

Refreshing beverage in the breeze

Tasty morsels meant to please

One more belt size by end of week

Ignored the treadmill’s diet speak

 

Crab stuffed mushrooms, pints of beer

Steak cooked “blue,” my favorite dear

Casino gambling…lost my tush

I had straight, the dealer flush

 

Leisure evenings, pleasant nights

Rolling ship’s, sleepy delights

All unwound now from the stress

Not one thought of next week’s mess

 

Now returned to Long Beach Berth

I offer up for what it’s worth

As I contemplate how Monday will be

I could really get used to being “lost at sea”

 

 

Copyright 2009  Patrick A. Granfors

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Crusin' Boozin' & Losin'...all for a good cause"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
You made a cruise sound soooo tempting! Great imagery in your words, and once again loved the lyrical flow! Very clever write, my friend!

Anna

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 1, 2009
Nice poem Patrick.
You must of had fun writing it.
richard

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 30, 2009
Sounds like fun Patrick. Finely described in your poem too.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 29, 2009
Oh Patrick, you should had done like Ulysses crew and plug your ears with wax...now it is too late, the Sirens and Nymphs have taken hold of your soul, you will never be free but at sea!

Georg

PS. thanks for your kind words about my work, although, you noisy neighbor...don't go butting in in our Ed family or you gonna go the Buzzard's way, to the BBQ!


Reviewed on September 29, 2009
Sounds like a great trip to me
Enjoyed the write thanks for sharing it
Have a good one, oh ya I guess you already did, so don't work to hard then
The Buzzard

Reviewed on September 29, 2009
Patrick,

Sounds so relaxing. It's such a bummer going to work on a MOnday.

Mary


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