I Lost my marbles (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Richard Parise

Reviewed on August 17, 2012

Clever nostalgia.. and funny too.

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on January 16, 2010

HAH!...isn't it fun to make some one laugh....loved this...pat medlin

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins

Reviewed on January 11, 2010

FUN!!!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on January 10, 2010

Laughing out loud!!!!! We all misplace our marbles now and then...don't worry....you'll find them again! giggle

Anna

Reviewed by lili dauphin

Reviewed on January 9, 2010

Very nice. Don't worry, you'll soon find your marbles. They're only gone for a short time.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 9, 2010

I'd help you find your marbles, Patrick, if I hadn't lost mine a loooooong time ago ... LOL! An excellent write, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 9, 2010

You should ask lady ga-ga when lost marbles are the theme(LOL)
You are a clever devil with words and I should visit that boat of yours to break a bottle of rum and look at pretty girls!

Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 9, 2010

Great write, Patrick. I truly enjoyed.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 8, 2010

I appreciate your wit and humor, Patrick and I think this is very clever. I love the flow enhanced by the rhyme and rhythm. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 8, 2010

great write Pat
using marbles to create this awesome piece
I too remember my favorites "the jumbos"
could have traded 5 for 1......
Peace be with you

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on January 8, 2010

Cute, now how long to get all the ducks in a row?? Used to have a whole bag full, now only three or four left as a remembrance...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on January 8, 2010

Patrick,

I always wondered why we compared marbles with the brain. Now I know why. Thanks for the laugh!

Mary

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on January 8, 2010

I enjoyed the wit and humor...M

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on January 8, 2010

I lost mine, grieved over it for a while, then bought a new bag ;)
Loved this
Ch'erie

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 8, 2010

Brings back fond memories, in this metaphorical write, Marbles were a great game to play, and no one wanted to lose any of them.

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on January 8, 2010

You're doing quite well without them, but if you insist start with the ones you already got, they might not be the best at thinking, but most likely hold good memories, and that's a good start ha.
As always very cute stuff, I enjoyed the way you rhymed them off.
Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on January 8, 2010

It's more fun to go through life with lost marbles. Maybe not such a bad thing.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 8, 2010

Hope you find your marbles soon; I lost mine long ago! LOL Cute write, Patrick; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 8, 2010

My goodness Patrick! I'd hate to think of you without them.
Since you say they are what keeps you going;-)methinks you'd
better get some replacements quick!lol
ET