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Devoid
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Notes from a past life

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A hippie and a red neck friend

Were sitting by the campfire

Both enjoyed a big fat joint

That launched them ever higher

 

 A bag of marshmallows beside them lay

Like delicately orbed temptation

As the darkness stole the breath of day

The hippie made a hazy observation

 

The stars presented their sparkling lights

As the fireflies joined the starlight’s twinkle

As they often do on summer nights

The hippie’s forehead began to wrinkle

 

Glowing embers betrayed the waning blaze

As their orientation wandered free

Both lost in thoughts in horizon’s gaze

The boundary they could no longer see

 

The pitch darkness and the fireflies

Merged with stars up in the sky

They could not decipher up or down

And took a toke to determine why

 

They each exhaled and shook their head

Becoming lost in life it seemed

“Maybe it’s like this when you’re dead

Exorcizing every thing you’ve dreamed”

 

Thinking that it might just be Hell

They stared deeply into the fire

Then they gazed around the darkened camp

Wondering do heaven’s twinkling lights inspire?

 

In the darkness they found the answer

Toasting orbs they now enjoyed

We are here on earth between two worlds

We are living in Devoid

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright 2010 Patrick A. Granfors

 


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 Reviews of "Devoid"
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
Certainly don't need any humor from this end when the den has yours, damn good one bringing back some fun memories...thanks, Ed

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
Hahaha! The imagery was hilarious!!! Well done Patrick!!! Still giggling....


Anna

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
Ask my li'l brother Jersey Ed for directions!!!!!(LOL) he is the only pilot flying without a plane behind is butt!!!

EDvard

PS. and brother PeeWee can vouch for it!


Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2010
Let me fire one up and see for myself. You're probably right though. Be back in 15 with my final answer.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 8, 2010
When the smoke clears tell me where I am?

George C.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on February 8, 2010
This is eerie. Was pondering this not too long ago--that this is something like "purgatory"(to the uninitiated, a kind of holding cell where you can purge your sins). And no--wasn't high, lol. Ah, memories. Smores, anyone? Great writing, Patrick!

Lin

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on February 8, 2010
Oh, and here I thought you may be serious, Patrick, but, "We are here on earth between two worlds, we are living in Devoid," Very funny, my friend.
Mark



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