Smoke on the Water (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 27, 2010

It has been said the Gods protect
The idiots and the fools

I thank the Gods for that, just about every day!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on April 27, 2010

Hahaha! Glad it all worked out for you Patrick....

Anna

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 27, 2010

How many blonds without towels can you hold in that spa of yours? LOL

Georg

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

so...you're the 'fire starter?'
cheers,
dan

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

Great meeting you yesterday, Patrick, although I really did have a taste for those Chicago style, kosher style hot dogs; oh, well, someother time my friend. As always, if your poems do not bring a "LOL" then know you almost always get at least a wide grin. By the way, since you purchased "Becoming" please, so you will enjoy the book, do not read anymore of my submitted excerpts.
Mark

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

patrick's story...
how outre'
toasted roasted
but not flambe'

can't finish w/out adding...
we all shout 'hooray!'

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

I am happy that you are well. We can replace things.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

lol Well done, Patrick. Enjoy !

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

Sounds swell to me.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

well, you did say aromatherapy, didn't you?! :)) Certainly atmospheric and thrilling to the senses, I'll give you that! ENJOY, Patrick... no wonder that water is warm and quivering...!! xx

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

I can hear Deep Purple right now.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

Though "grilling" of the self might have turned out to be pretty tasty to someone...as long as your house stayed in one piece...e

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

GOOD FOR YOU AND THANK GOD ALL IS WELL. HAPPY DAYS AHEAD TO YOU AND YOURS AND...OF COURSE...BE CAREFUL! THANKS FOR SHARING AND LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

Such clever verses inspired by a "could have been not so funny" event. Thank you for sharing your wit and humor, Patrick. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

What would life be, without all these little extras hm? Just keep on going mate, we keep our grilling priviledged, just in case you start burning up something else ha. Bless Ya! Jasmin Horst