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Vernal Tidings
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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My version of spring fever...to the tune "Nothing could be finer" Photo:Redbubble.com

Nothing’s so intoxic As the Vernal equinoxic In the morning Sol moving past the axis Gently guided by Abraxas In the morning The Cosmos does a tap dance Second fiddle to none To jumpstart Mother Nature And to welcome the sun Oh Nothing’s so intoxic As the Vernal equinoxic In the morning Nothing has more meaning Than the way the pole is leaning In the morning Focusing warm sunshine On my face just makes me feel fine In the morning Geese are winging birds are singing Flowers in bloom Winter’s presence at the inn Just ran out of room Oh Nothing’s so intoxic As the Vernal equinoxic In the morning Copyright © 2011 Patrick Granfors

Reviewed by Regis Schilken

Reviewed on March 14, 2011

It's too bad I can't hear you singing this!

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Reviewed by Mindy May

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

Oh, the eternal spring of life... how refreshing is thee? Without, we shall parish in the arms of lifeless color, decayed beauty and stale air.

Bravo, Patrick! Your choice of words are exquisite.

Intelligent Hugs~

Mindy May

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

besides being smart,you have a rare witty talent, Patrick;-)you always make me smile,and sometimes even laugh out loud! you really kept to the tune,bravo!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

makes me smile!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2011

Very nice indeed sweet man...stay safe and well...Hugsss

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Precise and equally true. e

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

And I sang every word, Patrick! Nicely done....

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Nothing has more meaning
Than the way the pole is leaning
In the morning

Very profound, in more ways than one!

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron