Siesta's Doorstep (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

Siesta's Doorstep
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I took this photo over Memorial Day weekend. It is pair of broken rubber bands that were functioning as an Ozark door closer. Helps to keep the bugs out but gives the mutts unsupervised in and out privileges. I have to replace them frequently however. I was trying to figure out the deep underlying meaning of the letters �CS� there on the floor. I will gladly Consider Suggestions.

It’s time for my siesta (c esta) The poem might Concede Sanity It’s tough Composing Stanzas That Contain Subtle profanity Chicken Soup is not profane Chicken Something just might be Common Sense may dictate The use of Colorful Speech by me Choosing Syllables when writing Can Seem like playing chess Especially if the word Count Slips My haiku Creating Stress A Capable Scholastic Might find the Challenge Still The path of Combining Synonyms Leads straight to Consuming Swill Copyright 2011 Patrick Granfors

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on June 9, 2011

Bravo!!! Ciongrations, Salute!!!

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 8, 2011

You are a Consummate Scholar for spending all your time with strange references to letters created by rubber bands. Wish I had time for such deep insight ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 6, 2011

Clever writing, Patrick; well done, my friend! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on June 5, 2011

Well done, Patrick!
Cloistered Seeker, CG
;-)

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on June 4, 2011

Original, just like the source of your inspiration. :)
Creative Skylarking?

Axilea

Reviewed by Jms Bell

THIS IS YOU, PATRICK...COMMON SENSE...IN COMEDIC SENTENCES...DEFINITELY, YOU. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Richard King

C omedian S upreme? - I used to partake in the use of an acronym CRS, but that�s one too many letters. I think you�ve used all the good ones, I�m C ompletely S tymied.. Great job, my friend. Dick

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Real cute indeed dear man...Hugsss

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Can't Stop reading this....giggle.....Cute Stuff!

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Since they give the mutts in and out access, C S must stand for 'Canine Shit' Enablers!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on June 3, 2011

This is quirky, quite hilarious!
What comes immediately to mind is Codfish Sorbet. Yum.
No, wait, more importantly, yet it's something I can't repeat right here.

Christine

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

that's how they do it in the Ozarks patrick, nothing new under the sun here:-)of rubber bands and electric tape!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Let's see what you can do with, uh, Costly Slut? Or, hmmm? Cheap Schmuck? or Campbell's Soup?
Mark

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

cAN'T sING...?