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The Velocity of Money
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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A microcosm of our economy;


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Mr. Biz strolled into town

Seeking a place to stay

He walked into a fine hotel

To the clerk had this to say

 

I wish to inspect one of your rooms

And with a hundred bill

He set it on the counter

A deposit if you will

 

While Mr. Biz went up the stairs

To check out his abode

The clerk took the note to his supplier

Just short walk down the road

 

He paid him for the steaks he’d served

In his hotel’s small café

And returned back to the counter

As if he’d never been away

 

The supplier went to the butcher

For the beef he had to pay

That he had trimmed for retail

For all the restaurants that day

 

Then the butcher saw the farmer

And reimbursed him for the steer

That he had cut in pieces

For the suppliers far and near

 

Then the farmer found the hooker

And paid her for last night

Then the hooker paid the hotel clerk

For their room used for delight

 

Just then Mr. Biz came down the stairs

And pronounced he wouldn’t stay

“The room’s too small and musty”

Took his money and went away

 

Everybody won that day

Mr. Biz and people met

The C-Note circulation paid

Everybody’s debt

 

So long as money moves along

We can all share in its magic

But when it slows the research shows

The consequences tragic

 

So get out there and spend a buck

To help the economy gain some speed

The faster money moves along

The better off we are indeed

 

 

Copyright 2011 Patrick Granfors

 


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 Reviews of "The Velocity of Money"
Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on November 16, 2011
I love the message in this well written piece, and how you patched it together in your woven weave.

I like the Franklin, for I am a doppelganger Ben Franklin poet that when I go places some call me Ben.

Blessings and best wishes.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on November 7, 2011
Lots of wisdom in your words, Patrick! Well said!

Anna

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 6, 2011
Best to spend it on american made products as I think that is the only way we all will grow...

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 5, 2011
Well said, Patrick. Just be sure we're not spending it on cars and other items imported in some foreign land.

Reviewed on November 5, 2011
You got a match? Don't waste it, a hundred bucks for a hooker, you want Bernies job? Gutenberg would have loved you, keep em comin Patrick, something got to give. Peace brother! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on November 5, 2011
Okay, okay, very funny and very clever. Of course though, all the changing of hands must go as greased cogs to bring the hooker back to the hotel to return the, by now, well handled C-Note... (within, I might add, no more than three or four minutes)...what if the whore used that seedy hotel down the street, huh? So when Mr. Biz asks for his hundred back, where do we go from there if the hundred has found its way to the seedy hotel down the street, huh?
Mark

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 5, 2011
Not only are you a poet, you have a positive solution to the country's economic woes. Based on the Slate of Republicans for the president and the apparent fact that everybody hates our current president, I think you should run for the spot because you represent what the average American needs in the way of a president. ;-)

Ron


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