Dominos (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 11, 2014

Interesting that Ed Matlack has the funniest review. He must be getting well...or sicker!

Reviewed on June 10, 2014

You haven't lived until you've ordered pizza in St. Louis. Saltines covered in ragu
. I'm from the east coast so maybe I was a little picky. But it is held in high regard....really.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on June 10, 2014

Typically clever in texture and imagery :)
You always offer up such fun Patrick!
Chris

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on June 10, 2014

That would explain delivery speed.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 10, 2014

Calling Dominos for a pizza in the woods??!! Wow - you should have called Jimmy Johns - they're Freaky Fast - or better yet, gone fishin for your dinner.

Reviewed by audrine max

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

ahaha.. oatmeal? i'll take the pizza, please.

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

VERY FUNNY Patrick! Now being my last name is Domino I can say "Watch out, because when I fall we all fall." Amen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

Intriguing write, Patrick; it "drew" me in. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

Nope, not sure I've seen this outlet on MY local high street, Patrick, but I'm definitely intrigued by it; my appetite has been whetted, so to speak!... Or perhaps not if they're served up cold and you can scratch the cheese with a stone and play draughts with the pepperoni! :) xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

That was some dream! I'm sure the oatmeal warned you up. But be careful, you never know when the next domino will fall. Don't we all?

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

i hope it was instant oatmeal ...

interesting ... i betcha the all seeing eye can see through this one ...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

enjoyed the read

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

Quite enjoyable, Patrick!

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

from Neptune or not, ordering online is a test of wills
budd

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

You have to learn to order online. And patience is a virtue. Funny poem, I could picture every minute of frustration with the universe.

Reviewed by Clarence Prince

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

After all the cold
After all the falling dominoes
A hot bowl of oatmeal must be really satisfying!
Well done!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

Oatmeal is actually good to have in cold weather, and is nutritional too.

Sandie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on June 9, 2014

Oatmeal is the key to sustained, unconventional thought. Yea! Oatmeal for the man from Neptune.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 8, 2014

You sir are STILL a very weird man, if you are a man coming from Neptune...the further out you get the smaller you get in mind and stature...maybe you have shrunk beyond your own recognition or mine...good to see & read you again, Patrick...if you go back to Neptune, on your way stop by and say hello to my Venusian relatives...e