Paul, exceptional flow to this poem. You have dreamt about the utopia that many crave. I picture heaven being like this - I hope it is! The line that really gets to me is, "and two souls were eager to touch." - I love the idea of transcending the physical to see what lies beneath. So few do that in this world~ Sheila
Reviewed by Duane Weide (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
This is a great write. I often dream of such brilliant places but I always found it right in front of me. If it was not in front of me I would create it. I love poems like this even though I dable in the dark.
Since committing an environmental crime on the post apocolyptic planet Klairn is grounds for execution, investigating the guilty is quite dangerous for a Protector of Klairn.
The rookies joining the ranks of this elite core of environmental spies
Ragged and weary from their previous ordeals, Braxton and his motley crew of elves, dwarves, and humans, set off into the Wilderkind Forest in search of the Sapphire of Souls. The problem is, the last time anyone saw the powerful gem was over a hundr
There's No One Attempted Perfection More Than
Me, Nor Is There a Perfect Place In This Holy Hell World,i.e. It Exists Only In Your Mind!
TRASK PS: What Can Go Wrong Will Go Wrong!