Great Haiku, last time I heard crickets was last month. I went to Roseberry Topping with Jim and Bob when they delivered trout to the lake there. Jackie <> <
lovely write, pam; thanks for sharing! so few words, but says VOLUMES! well done! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2003
nice work!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2003
Your use of the elements in your haiku is more true to form than most of us. If I'm not mistaken haiku originally was used to praise nature. Could be wrong here but i think so. Anywho, great haiku!
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c'mon, fall! there's at least a million of 'em out there...half of em are getting into my apartment, and the other half into the restaurant i work out
*jumpin crickets, they're another one*
they don't swim too good in ranch dressing, i found out LOL ewwwwwwwwwwww TMI (too much info) LOL
excellent haiku, though!
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)