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Hold You Tongue
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************************************* "Hold Your Tongue" Wind blow cold upon my shore Head departed from my body no more Alone�. With noble thoughts and joy within I think it will give you no offence To ease my melancholy today My soul will not depart today Yet I swear�. By the moon and by the stars No bloody hundred dollar golden chain Without a doubt Will be hung around my neck Without my consent For I am no damn child As thick as you may think I am I do not tremble nor do I fear All I know God is near As the wind will blow forever more I shall walk upon my lonely shore Trust in another will be no more Now� Speak no more of that to me Hold your tongue And let it be Copyright �2004 Tinka Boukes All rights reserved; and may not be reproduced in any way without permission from the author**

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 28, 2005

Tinka,

Very profound, emotive, masterfully imaged and versed poetic write my friend - excellent!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

For I am no damn child
As thick as you my think I am
I do not tremble nor do I fear
All I know God is near

Yes, He is. You Go, Girl!

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Great pen Tinka,
All things come to those who wait

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 16, 2004

I can relate sister!;-) better day tomorrow, I already saw it;-)
((((love an hugs)))))

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Tinka, although some days are easier than others my friend, just never let the down days keep you from seeing the bright days which are right around the corner. Excellent work. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

LOVED THIS TINKA
IT HAS A "THINGY" TO IT

WILLIAM ....PEACE

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

well-written. stick around. something new will happen tomorrow.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

(((tinka)))

eileen, now you...we're on the same page today--i feel the same way. (hey--i rhymed, wasn't intentional!) my job at the restaurant changed owners, uncertainty abounds...they SAY things will stay the ame, but you never know...pray for me, you have been in my prayers, okay?

powerful, hard hitting, emotional write--well expressed loneliness and pain!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Powerful write!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Powerful emotive verses, Tinka. Take care. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Ouch this is so sad; I hope you know how to float.

Best wishes for better days.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

If I hol' my 'ongue, I cant 'peak, let me let go of this tongue and say I enjoyed this as ever dear lady, glad to see you taking a bath, if only your head...Ed

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Strong composition, Tinka.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Agree with Karen below...sad and dark Tinka....
Time to adopt a more positive outlook....then even if the sun don't shine...the stars will...
Peter

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Don't lose your head Tinks..

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Sad and dark, Tinks; hope things get better for you! You are always in my prayers and thoughts; hope the sun shines soon for you!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(

And let it be