Heavenly Toy (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Like a wounded skylark left to die

Or a injured puppy on the highway

Or even to heal broken hearts and morals

Lost souls wandering

Without the joy in life

Oh snowflake clouds

Will you carry me along with you

In sunny light so warm

To where only sunshine comes along

Where no misery belong

Oh bring a song of joy to my heart…

From my loved one so very far apart

Close the book on bad history

Oh wonderous beauty of joy

Today you became

My heavenly toy!!

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

This is such a Beautiful and unique poem. snowflake clouds I love it.
God Bless You,
Tracey

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

self reflecting and positive......good ending

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 2, 2004

a lovely write

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 2, 2004

Tinka,

Your imagery floats so poetically as to indulge all the senses ... great verse: "Close the book on bad history" ... brilliant work!!

Best regards,

Robert

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 2, 2004

beautiful poetry!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

One heavenly toy for me please.

This is cute

Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

I enjoyed this a lot, it's really beautiful. And I hope they have the power.

Bob H

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

I want one of those toys for Christmas...let me write Santa and ask...Ed

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

Lovely Tinka!

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

A beautiful poem Tinka and enjoyed the music too.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

Nice and bubbly feel to this delightful pen ...Tinka..
Peter

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

I look at clouds from both sides now, ... simply cloudsplay, Tinka.

Ron

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

One interesting pen Tinka. A level above

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

Nice thing about your clouds, they change and move on, leaving us with new images for new life.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

Tinka this is just gorgeous in every way!

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

Sometimes, I read a poem or story here, and can't find the right words to say how much I liked it. This is one of them.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

beautiful write, tinks! well done! you are still in my prayers, sweetie!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

Wonderful Tinka, this is splendid poetry, be happy my friend!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

Close the book on bad history

I think we all need to try that, Tinka. Marvelous poem.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

(((tinka)))

beautifully done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

Ahh what a heartfelt write.
Nicely done!