Venom (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on January 7, 2005

i like this one a lot. more for what it doesn't say than for what it says. peace, poet...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on January 4, 2005

Ooooooh. Yeah, the rage is in this one.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on January 4, 2005

Take a sword and strike the snake: rebuke it and free yourself from it bloody oppression.

One who Knows
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

A very powerful write, Tinka. I'm going to agree with Ed...when you're ready to let go of the pain, you will feel so much better :) Trust me, I've been there recently

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

working past the pain can be agony, Tinka. well done.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Stunning ending, Tinka! I must profess to wanting to smack that snake, quickly, before he does more damage with its venom and crazed yellow eyes...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

isn't it strange how we can build a resistance to venom ...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Let it go Tinka...You WILL see and feel a difference...Find Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

a really sad write...sorry for your pain

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Ouch, sad write Tinks.

Ps can't believe the cricket score(:::

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Wow what a pic and poem.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

This is a pain-filled poem. Very graphic! ~ Sara

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Very good. Snakes do have a way of getting around.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

(((tinka)))

excellence! remind me not to make you mad :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Boy and that movie about Cobra is coming on the SCI FI channel soon.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Tinka,

A profoundly, extremely well-crafted poem - superb all the way!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Your words are much too powerful
to be venemous Tinka!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

I hope one day the venom wil be gone Tinka,replaced
by the love and light you desire...

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

yikes! remind me never to make you angry, tinka dear! LOL

powerful, emotive write; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(