Bare Illusion (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Beautiful Romantic so romantic.
Sadness should not be for this romantic times spent as one.
Love Tracey xoox

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Illusions, like dreams can come true. They will come true. We must live in reality, but they will come true... in His time...

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Honest, sad, beautiful write.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

don't cry just close your eyes and continue in that dreams
enjoyed to the make believe becomes real
enjoyed the tossed feelings here

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

A beautiful emotinal piece Tinka...Loved it

Paul;-}

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Beaches are the muse for lots of writers and you are no different, this is quite as well "illusionary" & imaginative...ed

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

all illusions are based in reality ...

this poem is embellished with emotion and beauty ...

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Hopefully the next time it will be reality.
Nice writing

Best wishes

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

A beautiful write. I love the ending.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Tinka,

Deepl sad and very emotional poem - superb rhyme my friend ... excellent!! Great image ...

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Both a lovely and a sad poem, Tinka, as you do them so well. Your Beach truly is your Muse.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

a soft, beautiful illusion, Tinka.....great write!

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

beautiful and sad...this is grand, Tinka

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

May be a dream, Tinka and dreams do come true.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Too sad my friend...I know the feeling;-)
smile Tinks you woke up;-)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

AWW TINKS. Cheer up, you lose the Cricket tomorrow..

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Such a sad ending but perhaps this illusion is your future in reality?

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Now this one is so beautiful that I must read it again. Well done Tinka.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

A captivating poem my dear which had me mesmerized. One of your best.